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I didn't say your view was that of a novice, but that the standard 3-paragraph essay structure is designed to make essay writing easier for novice writers. I apologise if you felt insulted; that was not my intent. The 3 para format is also useful in other circumstances, of course, but not for...

The format isn't fine. Yes, there is no law that says paragraphs must be 3, and I don't like the condescending comment that my view is of a novice standard, please take that back. If you are sending a formal letter, I think the style must be within certain limits i.e Formal limits. It looks...

Your leter is a bit long; hence, I have only corrected the first paragraph. With these comments in the back of your head, you should be able to improve the other paragraphs, too! There are some things that sound a bit strange to my ears. I have highlighted them. Please remember that you should...

Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the master’s programme in International Humanitarian Action. I will highlight my relevant knowledge, skills, and experience that qualify me for admission to your programme. Upon graduation, I will return to the not-for-profit sector as a health...

Hi, It is a new one. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the Engineering program (Diplome d'Ingenieur)at a member institution of N+I. I graduated in Automation with a bachelor degree in 2003 from the...