By Paragraphs, Formal letters

We have arranged for the surveyor to inspect these goods in November (or do you mean, on 7th November). After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal. You could say, "Following this inspection, they will...

I didn't say your view was that of a novice, but that the standard 3-paragraph essay structure is designed to make essay writing easier for novice writers. I apologise if you felt insulted; that was not my intent. The 3 para format is also useful in other circumstances, of course, but not for...

The format isn't fine. Yes, there is no law that says paragraphs must be 3, and I don't like the condescending comment that my view is of a novice standard, please take that back.If you are sending a formal letter, I think the style must be within certain limits i.e Formal limits. It looks better...

Hello .. I will give you some help in writing your letter .. I'm going to tell you how to write a very formal letter.. You should write your address right aligned in the top of the page.. after you finish writing your address skip one line and write the date also right aligned on the...

Can you help me with my English task? I have to weite a semiformal letter to this subject: You contact a previous teacher about your choice of career. Your heart is set on theatrical studies but your parents disapprove of this choice for various reasons. Ask for his/hers advice. (2-3...

Here's how you should lay it out: Date Name of recipient (This line and the next two should be single-spaced, this program won't allow me to do that.) Recipient's address Rest of address RE: What your letter is about Dear Name of recipient Here you start writing your letter. Begin by...

Your leter is a bit long; hence, I have only corrected the first paragraph. With these comments in the back of your head, you should be able to improve the other paragraphs, too!There are some things that sound a bit strange to my ears. I have highlighted them. Please remember that you should not...

Hi, Just tidy up these paragraphs a little bit. I have few questions connected with the application process for this course. Will my IBD qualify me to attend or would I need to take any additional courses, which are obligatory to access this course? How may points do I need to apply? Knowing...

Hi everybody I am writing a formal letter and I would like to write a final sentence saying: "Thank you very much for your attention and I am at your disposal for any further requests or explanations" Could you please help making it more formal? Thank you so much

hie! i just found this forum on the net and i thought it is very useful to people like me who have never written a formal letter before. i'm actually writing a letter applying for private scholarship to continue my education in foundation studies. but i have a really vague idea on how the letter...