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Over the past century, all kinds of unfairness and discrimination have been condemn ed or made illegal. But one insidious form continues to thrive : alphabetism. This, for those as yet unaware of such a disadvantage, refers to discrimination against those whose surnames begin with a letter in...

Sandie: I made some suggestions to the first few paragraphs below. You can use these as examples to apply to the other paragraphs. All the best to you! A-Stars -- -- -- - - --- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- -- i rewrote this essay for many time s , but i still struggle in with the verb tense s .....

dear forums, i have two paragraph or my articles. would you please to improve it? Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 What do you feel when the host of your blog delete your blog? Perhaps you feel sad and crazy. Your investment at the articles is lost in one...

Hi, The parts highlighted in Brown in paragraph ( B ) and ( C ) are grammatically correct. How about the parts highlighted in Brown in paragraph ( A ) and ( D ), are they also grammatically correct? In ( A ) and ( D ), is "to" means "according to"? ...

Hello, this is an article that I have written to promote some theory that I have written, I know it is quite long, but if anyone could check my grammar and punctuation then I would be very grateful. I am most concerned about the second paragraph. Thank you. .. When a smile is not a smile …...

I think your paragraph is pretty good. There are a few touches that could improve it, though. In the first sentence, I would suggest a dash instead of a comma--suggesting an added on thought to reinforce the first one. Also in that sentence "they are" should be "he or she...

I'm taking a correspondence course. These are some of the exercises that I need to submit. So please I need help from grammar exerperts thanks. Question 2 : In the following paragraphs, find one example of each of the parts of the sentence listed below. Lable each example clearly. You will...

Hi Nghiatran and welcome to the forums. You seem to have some problems with plurals and articles. You need to be careful about saying something WILL happen, instead of CAN happen. There are some negative effects in using computer in our life. First of all, using computer in all of important...

Hi, I am not sure if these sentence sare right or not in terms of their grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much. 1. What I really want to know is why I can’t write with my pen as quick as I type words on my computer...

Hello I am not sure if these sentence sare right or not in terms of their grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much. 1. What I really want to know is why I can’t write with my pen as quick as I type words on my...