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hi, i am going to apply for economic major for Undergraduate Application, can you help me to correct my whole essay? I am not good at grammar and i hope to make each paragraph more link and smooth. we are require to show our knowleadge on economics in our essay, also, we are need to tell why the...

Hello: The letter is too long to revise word-by-word here. You make a lot of small errors, most of which you can correct by going over an English grammar and usage book. To get you started I'll give you specific suggestions on the second paragraph. I don't understand the first part. Are...

I also have also had problems speaking clearly and coherently, making me seem less intelligent that i think i am. And as a result i have lost opportunties for relationships i had very much hoped for, so i had to be determined to work out my speaking problem. I think there are many reasons for me...

Any help "fixing" the following cover letter, would be greatly appreciated. I plan to send it to a research institute in the US which has a few internship positions available for students worldwide. In their own words, the cover letter should include a statement of my specific...

I have indicated the few outright corrections I could find in bold. Because you have chosen to present your information in sentence fragments, it is very difficult to analyze or make consistent any grammar present. If you continue to get complaints, I would suggest that you try casting it in...

Hi. I would greatly appreciate your time and effort to proof read my 3 paragraphs. Written for a media class assignment, magazine article. Please tell me the grammar mistakes in it. I've read it a few times though. The human mind may function as same as a...

Swiss Jake wrote: Given IQ is a purely anthropocentric means of assessing intelligence, Sidis' IQ is crudely estimated at 250-300. Infant Billy listened to Greek myths read to him by Sarah as bedtime stories. Started feeding himself with a spoon at eight months (after two months of...

Well, this discussion is kind of funny and endless. The women will always argue that THEY are smarter and the men of course the opposite. Anyway, I don't think that any option can scientifically be prooven. Of course, everybody is aware of that men have won more nobel prices and made...

I'm learning how to write an essay, this is one of my first attemps, so i will be very thankful if you help me.(The essay isn`t finished) Scientifc Aspects of Euthanasia>> > > Euthanasia is a very complex issue because it generates a lot of controversy among...

Hello, MontainHiker - This is Roberta Gallant in Concord, New Hampshire, again. I cannot order a grammar book on line. I do not have a credit cared to do that with. Instead, I would like you to check the paragraphs in my following letter sample about being in an elevator with another person...