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hi! i need to write essay about social justice issue, and my topic is "marriage". can somebody help me check my grammarm verb tense and proofread it for me. thanks in advance i really appreciate it.. Normal 0 false false false ...

Hello, this is an article that I have written to promote some theory that I have written, I know it is quite long, but if anyone could check my grammar and punctuation then I would be very grateful. I am most concerned about the second paragraph. Thank you. .. When a smile is not a smile …...

Hello Friends, I need to know, for what reason, a comma was left out of this title: Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels . I was viewing the plot description on the website IMDB, and could not help to wonder why a comma wasn't placed in the title of the movie after the word Stock . I do not...

Tell me what you guys think. I just wrote this narrative paragraph for a 12th grade english class. Our directions dictated that the paragraph must be about the worst day of our life and that it had to be 10 to 15 sentences long. September 11 th 2001, it was the worst day of my life and...

First, it needs to be divided into paragraphs. As it is, the length is offputting. Below, I have underlined some problem areas in grammar, punctuation, or vocabulary, and I have struck out unnecessary words (you may have to revise to reconstruct the sentences without these words): All the...

Excuse my butting in, but I got onto this site while wondering about "much" and "fewer", and I thought I'd throw in my expert opinion. Firstly, having read all the preceding posts and to save your valuable time, "many fewer" is correct and "much fewer" is wrong. That's grammar for you. What...

Hi all, I am a student from New Zealand studying Measure for Measure by Shakesphere and we have to write a formal essay going beyond the text. Here is the question Context/setting: This activity may be used as an extension to the study of a text. Students will develop an essay...

Thank you very much for checking (Vocabulary, words repetition, grammar, links, punctuation, text fomating , logical ideas order).

John, where James had had " had ", had had " had had". "Had had" had had the teacher's approval. To understand better, here is a story I made up. Both John and James are third persons here. Peter talks to Paul about John's and James' grammar usage. Peter says to Paul the above "had had"...

Ok this is my essay. I just registered. I have following comments to make on this essay. I have some grammar mistakes, don't have good transition between paragraphs, the conlusion doesn't really reemphasise how willy affected his family, word spelling, word tense, punctuation errors etc. Just...