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. 1. (My husband Mark and I both do volunteer work) but (Ryan was only six years old) -- two independant clauses conected by the conj. but? -- Well, yes... BUT sample sentences should make some sense, Fernanda! There is no evident relationship between the two facts, so they should not even be in...

Saturdays are slow, David. We have real lives here - softball games, trips to Sears, battling the grocery store. Don't get too upset if we take a few hours to respond. Are you looking for help on the paragraph about your gap? Don't put that on your resume! It is WAY to much...

Hi all, I am a student from New Zealand studying Measure for Measure by Shakesphere and we have to write a formal essay going beyond the text. Here is the question Context/setting: This activity may be used as an extension to the study of a text. Students will develop an essay...

<- O.P. Ah, thank you very much Clive. Your answer does clear things up somewhat. With that new light shed on the subject, I think the other problems I was having are less grammatical errors, and more just an issue with my naive logic attacking my... questionable skill with English grammar....

One of the English words that troubles me the most is the little fellow " AS ". Below is a sample paragraph quoted from an article: "The giants had been expelled from the mountain; but they had only withdrawn to the neighboring cities of Philistia ( Joshua 11:22 ). Thence they had, as must...

Hello, MontainHiker - This is Roberta Gallant in Concord, New Hampshire, again. I cannot order a grammar book on line. I do not have a credit cared to do that with. Instead, I would like you to check the paragraphs in my following letter sample about being in an elevator with another person...

Hi everyone Here is my first draft of critiquing a journal. I am not sure if I am on the right track. Can anyone give me some suggestions and correct my grammar? Thanks. Critique of “The Effects of Amount and Type of Exposure on Adult Learners’ L2 Development in SLA” This research...

Hi, My comments are that your essay wanders too much. Or in other words, your essay needs a tighter focus. Your grammar is actually pretty good. It’s your organization of your essay where you need to apply the most attention. Try making an outline: 1) Love is a four letter word. ...