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Hi everybody, I strongly disagree with the views mentioned on behalf of the Callan Method. Just because it promises to get the student where he or she wants to, doesn't mean the Method deserves criticism. I've been teaching English both the traditional way and the Callan Method way for...

. I have already commented on the style problem. Below, I have underlined incorrect or unnatural grammar and vocabulary only: My combined study partner, Computer is lying on the russet table nearby the desk. Its versatility assists me adeptly in studies. Although it is a machine but profoundly...

. I suppose that this is a vocabulary and composition assignment from your teacher, but this style of writing is inappropriate for such mundane topics. I have underlined problem areas and struck out inappropriate metaphors and other words: My computer, the caretaker of my studies, lies over...

First, welcome to the Forums. You may have noticed that this is basically a place for students of English as a foreign language to post questions they have about grammar, vocabulary and writing. Native speakers, however, can also get some help here. There is no need to go directly to a moderator...

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

First, it needs to be divided into paragraphs. As it is, the length is offputting. Below, I have underlined some problem areas in grammar, punctuation, or vocabulary, and I have struck out unnecessary words (you may have to revise to reconstruct the sentences without these words): All the...

Hi, everyone! Happy New Year! But I'm trying to be happy. I'm pulled into a debate over "the very English standard" in a Chinese translation forum. A "sensible" lad who crammed in China's New Oriental Language School asserts that many usages, including those in nytimes.com, economist.com,...

Hi, everybody! Maybe I should have started with "well," but I can ensure you that I'm the original poster, while this guy Anonymous wrote: Well, I have a half-finished game of noughts and crosses tattooed on my forehead. If you do too, then I guess... is not (but I found his/her...

Thank you very much for checking (Vocabulary, words repetition, grammar, links, punctuation, text fomating , logical ideas order).

You have a very good grasp of vocabulary but just have a few problems still with grammar. I've corrected the first couple of paragraphs for you so you can see what you might need to take another look at in your final paragraph. Since the 9/11 incident five years ago, American officials have...