By Paragraphs, Grammar

Not redundancy--repetition for emphasis and clarity. It's hard to come up with good examples on the spur of the moment; however, here is a good example I found on the site linked below.Here's a short example of structural repetition from the play Getting Married, by George Bernard Shaw:...

Hi all, could you help me with grammar in my covering letter? I know that first paragraph is fine so I would like to ask you to check the middle part which is below.Recently, I decided to increase my knowledge of payroll and become familiar with current payroll legislation. As you will see from...

Hi all, could you help me with grammar in my covering letter? I know that first paragraph is fine so I would like to ask you to check the middle part which is below.Recently, I decided to increase my knowledge of payroll and become familiar with current payroll legislation. As you will see from...

{I tried to level my best to modify the first two paragraph and posted here, also I have given few more paragraphs in the story. If you are interested I am ready to give full story. Pl rate my level of english. Thanks in advance-Canada_1966}Foot size of letters and hoardings were made for each...

Thanks for you comments. As you suggested, I am going to modify the first two paragraphs. And, just to let you know that I have not used any tranlating software.

Hello Canada 1966, welcome to the forum.I've got a feeling that you ran your own language through one of the translation softwares such as Babelfish as this reads very much like the sort of thing they come up with - translating single words without really being able to consider the overall...

Foot size of signboard letters in the hoardings lived together for the diversified advertising on the wall. Nijam Lady tobacco - R.K.Bras - Cautions! Revolution! - Gospel meetings -Haji Musa Apparel store (Apparel ocean). (30-Sep-1973) That was the day of carrying fire-pot for those who did not...

Hi New2, I'm just playing around here. Yoong missed this one from the same paragraph. The verb "to seem" works like "verbs of sense." It ain't transitive. It is arrogant; it seems arrogant; it sounds arrogant. In your sentence, you need a transitive verb. It may...

.OK, now let's try not to be so grandiose and wordy:My computer, my cyber tutor, a great help in my studies, stands on the russet computer desk. Its applications and language tools assist me efficiently, rectifying my grammar and typographical errors.My speedy mouse sits quietly on its black...

Thanks for pointing out my mistakes Mister Micawber !Well i have change the whole point and rephrase: Please check these sentences My computer, a great cyber tutor plays like a helper in the crucial times of my studies (phrase ok or too long?), lies on the russet computer desk. Certain...