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Question: Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings? My introduction paragraph is like this: According to the recent research, there are 50 to 100 million of animals worldwide , from Zebra-fish to non-human primates, are used in scientific experiments. Yet at the...

Hi Doll, I am preparing for the IELTS (International English Language Testing System) test which will be by the end of the week. Writing is an important part of the exam, we may be given any topic (Food, Weather, ... ). We should write at least 250words and 4 paragraphs (Introduction:...

I am working on Focus on IELTS and did the first essay in that book. Please help me to check and let me know what you think. Thank you very much. PS: the record in the essay was provided by the book. Individually, write 3 paragraphs on the following topic Writing topic: What are the...

hi mr Goodman, your writing is well developed obviously, but the writing purpose of the whole paragraph, i feel, is to convince the reader of the importance of the visual and ambient effects, while my original saying is for the noticeable consumption, thus government should make the...

Hi, I came across to find out this website from google.com and want to improve my writing skill. Would anyone please to review my essay and give me suggestions? I sincerely appreciate any commentary. == writing task == Subject: Qualities of people that we need in our society can't be learned in...

Hi Dmitrij, I was merely trying to add my two cents about academic writing in general -- things you do in class. Exam strategies are a different animal altogether. In an exam like IELTS, the important thing is making sure every part of the question is answered. You've covered that part...

Dear Julielai, Thank you very much. I enjoyed immensely your witty remark. No doubt, your 2 cents are a priceless treasure for all essayists in this forum. I hate being obstinate, but I am still not convinced that my strategy lacks rationality. I have not sought for unquestionable...

Hello everybody, This is the final part of my work. Timing issues and MY ESSAY Time could kill your essay as well as bad structure and poor vocabulary. But do not try to kill time yourself. Allow no more than a minute for panicking, sweating and jittering, then stop. Has it put down a...

Dear forum visitors, I have already posted this in some other forums but I think it is not so ugly to consider it my little contribution to your English writing community. Seems as though most of you are bored with reading ready essay samples accompanied with help-me-correct-this appeals....

I suggest you mention the consequence of ignoring the human factor much earlier in the essay. Mention also the impact of low morale on the company. I don't see the relevance of the second paragraph to the topic. If you think product development is just as important, then elaborate on that.