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Add this to your first paragraph: Being a non-smoker I agree to smoking bans in certain settings, such as workplaces and enclosed public spaces, mainly on the grounds of hygiene and safety.

Dear Julielai, Thank you very much. I enjoyed immensely your witty remark. No doubt, your 2 cents are a priceless treasure for all essayists in this forum. I hate being obstinate, but I am still not convinced that my strategy lacks rationality. I have not sought for unquestionable...

Dear forum visitors, I have already posted this in some other forums but I think it is not so ugly to consider it my little contribution to your English writing community. Seems as though most of you are bored with reading ready essay samples accompanied with help-me-correct-this appeals....

Hi Thank you very much indeed for the comments. I personnaly agree totally with you for not including my conclusion in the first paragraph, however, I read in one IELTS trainning book that the first paragraph (the introduction) should summarise the overall idea of the essay, including the...