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Thanks! to whom that correct my grammer mistake. It is bascally about my grandpa passing all i need is a grammer check. The paragraph/story struture don't matter. As many of you know, losing a love one is very painful and hard to get through it may takes many months to recover....

Actually I don't have problem with the last sentence. In fact, your suggestion works well in the last sentence. My problem is the tense switch. I know the easy way out is to stick to one tense from start to end like I did in the answers I provided (one in past tense and the other in present...

Here's my guess. I could be wrong. I would pick one tense and try to stick to it as much as possible. Sounds like you're interested in the present tense. So let's analyze it, which is my second version. David likes to joke, even with his parents (No problem. To me, it sounds like...

Vincent Teo wrote: Can you give me some comments? I know everyone has a best friend. My best friend is Mi. She is my class monitor. She is also my Church member jokes too. I hope our friendship will never end. You are inconsistent - keep to the present tense. Your last paragraph...

Feebs11 wrote: Paragraph 3: Thank you very much. You are a very kind person. Please remember to ask all those questions, because answers to those questions can change someone's life. Thanks a lot. I hope they pick up the phone in this year. Yes, I was making a joke. Thanks a lot...

Jackson6612 wrote: Please make corrections/edits to the following paragraphs. Paragraph 1: I know it does not seem nice to ask you for this favour, but I have no one else to ask for this. I need some information from X University. I cannot speak English, so if I tell you my problem , ...

User_gary wrote: Abu Nawasi was a very clever man and he liked to make people laugh. He told jokes he already knew and also made up new ones. Sometimes he thought of such funny answers to people's questions that they laughed and laughed. Everyone wanted to speak to him. He was very popular...

Abu Nawasi was a very clever man and he liked to make people laugh. He told jokes he already knew and also made up new ones. Sometimes he thought of such funny answers to people's questions that they laughed and laughed. Everyone wanted to speak to him. He was very popular and also the king's...

'My knowledge of Canuck French derives from motion pictures usually with Nelson Eddy and Jeanette MacDonald, and it consists largely of "BY GAR". It's odd but I didn't hear a single one of the potato pickers say "By gar", and they MUST HAVE SEEN THE PICTURES AND KNOWN WHAT IS RIGHT'. I think that...

Hello friends, I would like some more explanation about this paragraph I think I understand but I'm not sure: 'America is such a racist place, ...It's just like South Africa only more sanitized today; it's not as OUT IN FRONT in its racism. Other than that, it's the same thing.' Does it...