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sadness — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 21:57:20 GMT

hi every one
I'm new her
I had wrote paragraph about Importance of English
I need someone edit my paragraph plz.
thank you friends

sadness

No one denies the importance of English language in the present time as global language. It is clear that the English language has become more dominant around the world. In some countries it use as the mother tongue and ,other countries learn it as second language in their schools. This is make English widespread. In addition, many reasons which contributed to rising of English spreading . for example, use it for communication between people around the world, as well as, it is language of modern times. On other hand , English is the language of science and technology.

There is no doubt that, the English is language of communication between the people with different cultures . It is also the language of computers that help to communicate with the people around the world through Internet technology and e-mail. People who know English can deal with the Internet, which is regard information and communications revolution .

Also one of reasons that contributed to the spread of English that, it is the language of the modern era. Where the people are use it in various field of life such as, economy, e-commerce, medicine and aviation. In addition ,it is the language which use in the tourism and travel. This reasons motive the people to learn English .

One of the main reasons why the English is dominant in the present time, use it in the field of education by universities and institutes and, they use it in scientific research . It has become an addendum to the mastery of scientific individual stock. On the other hand, the English is an important requirement in most government jobs and private.

It is quite clear that English has become an necessity today. We need it in different fields of life . The English language has become easier to learn more than ever before with the availability of many sources to help people learn very easily. Such as the Internet, books and educational institutes which spread around the world.

Re: Hi friend, please help me correct this paragraph.

Goodman — Tue, 22 Jan 2008 22:29:09 GMT

Quangtrungvtv wrote:
Day by day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone could help me learn . I go to night class everyday expect sunday evening . I joint English forum and find many friend help me . I always try my best to learn english but I had some difficult are : the fisrt conditional, second conditional, third conditional, and passive form , If some in English forum explane those , I am very thanks. And remember check all sentences I wrote here. Thanks my friends.

Hi Quangtrungvtv,

Here is what I see and my comment:

Some phrases you used either donât serve the purpose you have intended, or they are not properly used. There are obvious capitalization, punctuations and spelling errors. Here is how I would rewrite the paragraph to smooth out the tone and the rough edges:

Everyday, I try to learn and study English very hard. I have tried every method and people are very kind in helping me to learn. I attend night class every evening except Sunday. I frequently visit English forums and find many volunteers to help me. I am eager to learn but I have many difficulties to overcome. For examples, conditional usage and passive usage are some of the areas I need help on.

I am very thankful if anyone at the forum can explain the differences and please correct my sentences.

Thank you, my friends .

Re: Hi friend, please help me correct this paragraph.

Fandorin — Tue, 22 Jan 2008 21:20:20 GMT

Quangtrungvtv wrote:

Day after day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone can help me to learn . I go to night class everyday except of sunday's evening . I join to English forum and find many friends who help me a lot . I always do it the best but there are some difficulties: the fisrt conditional, the second conditional, the third conditional and passive form. If someone on English forum explains those , I would be very grateful . And remember check all sentences I wrote. Thanks my friends.

Hi friend, please help me correct this paragraph.

Quangtrungvtv — Wed, 17 Oct 2007 06:09:27 GMT

Day by day, I learn english very hard , I find every method and everyone could help me learn . I go to night class everyday expect sunday evening . I joint English forum and find many friend help me . I always try my best to learn english but I had some difficult are : the fisrt conditional, second conditional, third conditional, and passive form , If some in English forum explane those , I am very thanks. And remember check all sentences I wrote here. Thanks my friends.

Re: This way, we can correspond and discuss problems easily, don't you thin

Feebs11 — Tue, 04 Sep 2007 13:37:07 GMT

Jackson6612 wrote:
Please make corrections/edits to the following paragraphs:

It was a typo where I misspelled tomorrow. PM stands for Private Message. I had to log into my hotmail account just to check your email. If you had PM facility, I could have just PMed you through Latinforums, and you could have checked that PM and replied to me through Latinforums. This way, we can correspond and discuss problems easily, don't you think? Besides that, I don't log into my account regularly but I do make regular visits to Latinforums.

Now I have started using Collins COBUILD Dictionary. I must say it's a great dictionary with very easy-to-understand definitions and with a lot of example sentences. I had been using American Heritage and Merriam-Webster's dictionaries since I started to learn English. I will still use them occasionally. I wish I had been using that Collins' dictionary since a long time ago [from the start]. I knew there were some ''Advanced Learner...'' kind of dictionaries, but I always thought they were very difficult since they had that ''Advanced'' word attached to them. I must also admit that I gained a lot of knowledge from M-W's and Am Heritage dictionaries.

This way, we can correspond and discuss problems easily, don't you think?

Jackson6612 — Tue, 04 Sep 2007 11:17:50 GMT

Please make corrections/edits to the following paragraphs:

That was a typo where I misspelled tomorrow. PM stands for Private Message. I had to log into my hotmail account just to check your email. If you had PM facility, I could have just PMed you through Latinforums, and you could have checked that PM and replied to me through Latinforums. This way, we can correspond and discuss problems easily, don't you think? Besides that I don't log into my account regularly, but I do make regular visits to Latinforums.

Now I have started using Collins COBUILD Dictionary. I must say it's a great dictionary with very easy-to-understand definitions and with alot of example sentences. I had been using American Heritage and Merriam-Webster's dictionaries since I started to learn English. I will still use them occasionally. I wish I had been using that Collins' dictionary since a long time ago. I knew there were some ''Advanced Learner...'' kind of dictionaries, but I always thought they were very difficult since they had that ''Advanced'' word attached to them. I must also admit that I gained a lot of knowledge from M-W's and Am Heritage dictionaries.

Re: Best way to learn English?

Anonymous — Fri, 06 Apr 2007 23:56:46 GMT

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After a quick look ,the way my teacher and essay books say that an essay has a structure .
And topic sentences.
The structures generally of an essay are:

Introduction
Body
Conclusion
You can look in google for "five paragraph essay"until I'll find you a specific good example.
I think the place where are you learning should provide you with (model essay) more information on essay
struture,connectives to connect paragraphs and make the essay flow(similiar to driving a car)
and topic sentence.There is different essay types such as Argumentative essay,normal essay...The other thing to concider when writing essays is if you can use first person prounouns,formal ,informal language.

Please integrate the information at the end of your essay in a paragraph,give fewer example.
Your first draft looks good,but it need more cutting and pasting to look like an essay.
I'll give quick example of a topic sentence.
(Introduction)Please don't write introduction ,just introduce your topic
There is different English language schools in Emirate.Students choose the best language school for them depend firstly on the course cost,secondly teachers profile and finally transportion
(Topic sentence 1)
Cost (As you notice in T.S.1 you'll talk about cost only in this paragraph)
(Topic sentence 2)
Teachers profile(paragraph)
(Topic sentence 3)
transportation(Paragraph)
In conclusion or in summary,you can write either of these(sum up briefly what you said in you essay,don't introduce new ideas)

You can have a look at Nawal thread cause there is some suggestion on essay writing.But be careful don't change it to argumentative essay if the teacher doesn't want to.
Good luck in your essay,your english is really good.I hope I did good and no harm.

I hope bestÂ§

please ,help me to correct my paragraph.

Toetoe — Sun, 26 Nov 2006 18:54:01 GMT

hi,

our teacher asked us to write a paragraph about the reasons why i wanted to learn english.i will be glad if somebody helps me to correct it and to omit my mitakes(including punctuation).

here is my paragraph:

Because of many reasons caused the actual world's conditions i took the decision to learn english.In a world ,that can be considered as a global village,english is the world lingua franca.as it is pratical and not complex ,it is spoken everywhere.In many countries,english had been choosen to be the primary language , in a way to solve the problem caused by the variety of local dialects.In india for exemple ,english is the official language alongside hindi.Another reason is that the importance of english in my country is increasing .This language is occuping more and more space in our school system.In some jobs ,speaking english has become an obligation.Also ,as english is the worldwide language ,many hitorical and idiological books are translated to it ,therefore learning it will allow me to find out new cultures and to enrich my knowledges. Finally,,learning english today has been inescapable ,neverthless we have to hold on our mother tongue.

Re: Communicative English

Anonymous — Sun, 04 Jun 2006 13:50:56 GMT

Hi,

I dont understand why they make such a hue and cry over communicative English. If one gets a basic education, say for 10 years or so, one will surely be aable to handle effortlessly the language in which he has studied. In the commonwealth countries, if a person gets the basic education that means he is able to handle English as well. All one lacks is lack of practice. You cannot learn swimming without getting in the water. So the only way to learn English is by speaking, listening to good English, like the BBC news, reading simple writings in English, and ofcourse thinking in English.

Ask the students to listen to the English news at least for five minutes daily, read a minimum of one paragraph of English other than their text books, and make them speak in English. Make them realise that while doing so, it is not a sin to make mistakes, advise them not to be ashamed of their mistakes, and last but not the least, do not tease them for their mistakes.

Lo, in just 2-3 years, you are sure to reach your goal

Best of luck!

Re: please somebody give me a suggestion!!!

Elephunk_success — Mon, 08 May 2006 19:37:35 GMT

Hello Nona the brit,

Thank you for your reply. Here is my motivation letter. Could you please take a look? There are 2 questions that I have to answer

1. Why do you want to join the course?

2. Would you like to be considered for entry into the foundation year or the second year?

I have a problem about linking idea, it should be about 3-4 paragraphs. I don't know how to make it flow smoothly. I also worry about grammar. I'd appreciate for a comment to improve my letter.

Here it is!

Dear Ms (name),

I am writing to apply for the bachelor of (course) in the academic year 2006/2007. I would like to be considered for entry into the foundation year of the programme.

At the moment, I am studying (....) Science course at (college) in (city). I have been facing lots of problem such as being under pressure when I cannot handle some experiments which are executed during the course, and the course content is too difficult. I have thoroughly considered that this kind of profession will not suit me. I prefer studying language to science.

In February this year, I started looking for other schools which provide language study. Then I found the programme in your school. I was very enthusiastic about it. As you know, I made a contact with you many times. By going to the open day, I was impressed by the place and the teacher I was talking to, she is so kind.

This is not the important reason yet. I think I am right for this study because of my experiences. Although, I studied science programme when I was in the secondary school, I often participated in English activities, I chose English as my elective subject. I like to study English because it is the primary internation language in today's world. There were two Canadian teachers working in my school. That was a great opportunity for me to learn English from the native speakers. After I finished the secondary school, I worked as a voluntary teacher in my old school. I taught English to the upper secondary students for 15 days. I felt very happy. I enjoyed teaching them and they also liked to study with me.

I have been thinking about English education in my home country. Most people cannot speak English fluently, although English lessons are given in every school. I want to know why and I have a desire to solve this problem. I observe people in other countries which they do not speak English as a mother tongue, The Netherlands for example, I come up with many questions; why most people are able to speak English, how do they learn? What is wrong with our own education system? How to improve the teaching techniques? Etc. I have a passion to learn and to help people in my country.

If I am admitted to study in your school, I will do my best to learn any skills in order to become a fluent English user and an effective English teacher. After I have already graduated, I will return to my homeland to develop the academic standard.

Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

(my name)