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Hello, I am Richard, a Dutch undergraduate student applying for a Masters programme in London, England. As a part of the application form, I have to give 'further information' , which I interpreted as roughly analogous to a letter of motivation: " 9. Further Information Please state your...

Overall, your use of the English language itself is good. You need to work on essay form and focus. I wonder if it is necessary that all students should be required to take courses in the sciences whether they have an interest in them or not. In a sense, I agree insofar as the benefits of...

hello. Recently, there was a death in my girlfriends family. She took it very hard, and I spent much of the last week comforting her. I take an online ENG102 class, and haven't really had time to look at the work. Today, I finally logged on and saw I had an essay due by midnight tonight. I must...

Nguyen Thi Le Dung Provenierssingel 85 A 3033 EJ Rotterdam UNIVERSITY COLLEGE UTRECHT Faculty: Academic Core, Humanities, Science, and Social Science. Dear Sir: I am a Vietnamese citizen living in Holland and I would like to apply for the Bachelor of Liberal of Art's Degree program in...

Hi, Phew, there is a lot to get hold of here! I think that mountainhiker's suggested structure will work very well for this letter and you have worked hard to make improvements to your original. I think you still need to plan your letter a little more clearly as at the moment it is all a bit...

My mother Mary Johnson is like a lot of mothers. She has a busy career and a hectic schedule outside of work. She is a practical nurse at a long-term care facility and is also a nursing student at a local community college where she plans to obtain her associate nursing degree. Besides her...

Hey rob! Just found this on the net. It seems to be a logical guide to preparing a general essay for academic work. Written Project Style Guide http://www2.art.utah.edu/coursework/styleguide.html (updated 1 May 2003) The University of Utah The most effective suggestion I can make...

Rob, I remember adding to another essay thread just like this. May I copy the first paragraph from that essay for you. This is possibly how a better classification essay could begin (I don’t mean to be rude). “A hero is a person noted or admired for nobility, courage, and outstanding...

I reckon it’s Important to start from a generalization and move to things that are more specific. Maybe begin your essay like this: A hero is a person noted or admired for nobility, courage, and outstanding achievements. (From The Oxford American Dictionary of Current English) If one...

Maybe I can suggest a framework for your essay. * Define hero maybe by getting a definition from the dictionary. Pad it out a bit with examples of the stereotypes often associated with the ‘hero’. * State who your hero is and why he fits the hero category. * Reinforce your reasons for...