In Paragraphs^x, Metaphors^x, Alliteration^x

Hi knjiga, Welcome to the English Forums. Thanks for joining us. IMHO "Doubtlessly" doesn't fly here. Sadly spoiling your alliteration, I'd go with "Doubtless, those tributaries are divergent." The image is still problematic. I wouldn't exactly call it a mixed...

A few points after a quick scan. 1. Use paragraphs! 2. 'After doing some research' 'The research done made known the fact that' 'A dictionary along with hours of reading and re-reading made it fairly apparent that'. All pointless padding contributing nothing to your answer. You may have a...