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Hi knjiga, Welcome to the English Forums. Thanks for joining us. IMHO "Doubtlessly" doesn't fly here. Sadly spoiling your alliteration, I'd go with "Doubtless, those tributaries are divergent." The image is still problematic. I wouldn't exactly call it a mixed...

. I suppose that this is a vocabulary and composition assignment from your teacher, but this style of writing is inappropriate for such mundane topics. I have underlined problem areas and struck out inappropriate metaphors and other words: My computer, the caretaker of my studies, lies over...

Hello Guys! Please check my paragraph for mistakes and wrong wordings. And tell me, metaphor i used in opening line, can we use like this in topic sentences? Thanks! The computer, the caretaker of my studies, lies over the flat table at the other side of my desk. Although it serves as a...

Hey guys now please check my paragraph again for mistakes and some suggestions to add good metaphors or improvements. Thanks ! The computer lies over the wooden table against the mid-wall of my room. Its gradual help in my studies supported me like caretaker. Usually my spelling...

Hello Grammar Geek, thanks for helping me here! Well I don’t understand the previous post. Giant size, are you saying about speaker size I should emphasis for metaphor? My light-brown table placed on the opposite side opposite side of the bed from what? of the bed,...

Emeraldisle wrote: THANKS IN ADVANCE. HELP ME WITH MY ASSIGNMENT. Story: The Kite Runner Author: Khaled Hosseini Theme: (1) Sacrifice: Sheep are slaughtered as a sacrifice to Allah, to show devotion, but also as a form of atonement. Amir and Hassan are embodiments...

Hello Guest In addition to NtB's comments: 1. 'Although the poem resonates of' > 'resonates with'. 2. 'One of the main characters, Johnny, emphasizes “Nothing Gold Can Stay,”' - I'm not sure 'emphasizes' is the right word here. Emphasis needs a particular context. 3. Last line -...