In Paragraphs^x, Metaphors^x, Verbs^x

. I suppose that this is a vocabulary and composition assignment from your teacher, but this style of writing is inappropriate for such mundane topics. I have underlined problem areas and struck out inappropriate metaphors and other words: My computer, the caretaker of my studies, lies over...

Hello Guys! Please check my paragraph for mistakes and wrong wordings. And tell me, metaphor i used in opening line, can we use like this in topic sentences? Thanks! The computer, the caretaker of my studies, lies over the flat table at the other side of my desk. Although it serves as a...

Hello Grammar Geek, thanks for helping me here! Well I don’t understand the previous post. Giant size, are you saying about speaker size I should emphasis for metaphor? My light-brown table placed on the opposite side opposite side of the bed from what? of the bed,...