This is for people who grade, practice for or who have taken the FCE. In other forum, I saw this advice posted to someone who had written a draft paragraph: Hey, its not too bad but you should use more colloquial expresions like wanna,

Good Morning ! This is be informed that as per the go concierge Mr. Carlo Logli supose to arrive by flight number EY 004 at 07:20 am , But there were no flight number 004 today as per Ms. Princess in Etihad Airways, EY 004 is coming tomorrow

They are paragraphs more than sentences. A sentence ends when there is a period "." several sentences together are called a paragraph. In paragraph 1. It is an issue of timing between depositing into an account and taking money out.

Hi, I'm writing this essay, but I'm not sure about this paragraph, does the text has grammatical mistakes?: "Among other similarities with the portraits of Buddha are the depictions of children clambering over John Yu's head and

I wrote an essay about "Neighbors" by Raymond Carver. I tried my best, but I feel I need help to make correction of grammar mistakes and word choosing mistakes. I don't know whether you know about the story, "Neighbors" by

I've written the following paragraph. I am sure that there are some mistakes {if not many} in it. It would be nice if someone can correct the errors and let me know the mistakes that I made. I can greatly improve my writing skills. :) "

Why don't you start by underlining the errors.

second para is perfectly ok from side The second paragraph is not OK– it has three spelling mistakes and is in mixed registers.

In order for the experts to offer you advice, the description of the accidents and names (parties) must be clearly identified so that the forum can understand without any doubts. Perhaps it's only me; all I can gather was an auto accident had

Anon, check your spelling. The. Counselor. Dance. Nearly. Look for other mistakes. Leave a blank line between your paragraphs. It's two positions, so make that plural. I have enclosed or I am enclosing.