By Paragraphs, Motivation letters

Hi, You need to break this into several paragraphs in order to show the reader how you have organized your thoughts. If you don't, I doubt that anyone here will want to try to respond to this. Best wishes, Clive

Hi all! I have written this to the best of my ability. I'm pretty secure about the language part, as I'm bilingual, but it's the culture part that I want to check works. Some stuff I need to put in there, like the reason for the GPA - it's part letter, part appeal. But, this is...

I dont know what happened. When I inserted, it kooks fine. But if i send it, all paragraphs are have gone May be I have to tape it here, haven't I?

Hi, You need to organize what you want to say into a number of shorter paragraphs, each dealing with a particular point that you want to make. Try that, and repost if you want to, OK? Best wishes, Clive

well your motivation letter is good just arrange it in paragraphs.well...what u are coming to kathmandu...o r in kathmandu at this date I think...well i wrote in because I belong to kathmandu.so good luck with your social works here in kathmandu and hopefull you will like our place. regards

Hi, now I have some questions: * In the sentence "and already in high school they brought me to the decision that I would like to continue my future studies..." you placed "even" instead of "already", so we don't use already in this context? Because in Hebrew and Russian it's the most suitable...

Thank you very much Clive! Your edits was VERY useful. But now I have some questions: * In the sentence "and already in high school they brought me to the decision that I would like to continue my future studies..." you placed "even" instead of "already", so we don't use already in this...

Hi, I've made quite a number of edits for you to look at. I'm not sure exactly what the name of this university is. Some have special names, 'eg 'The University of Toronto', while others are simple, eg 'Bristol University'. What does it say on their website. Can you just call it 'Erasmus...

Please help me with the motivation letter..specially in the forth paragraph..Any modifications and suggestions will be accepted..This letter answers the following question: " Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic objectives and the reasons why you wish to pursue them....

Mimoi2 wrote:Does anyone have any suggestions for this motivation letter? Anything would be really appreciated! Name Address1 Address2 Phone Date To Whom It May Concern: I would put a comma after the Concern rather than the semi-colon. With this letter I would like to express...