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Hello, I am going to put my suggestions and corrections next to your words, but they will be in bold, in paraenthese, and on the right side of the word(s) so you know which word and what my suggestion is. Is that ok with you? Tell me what you think. Also, in case you did not notice, you seem to...

Memos show Clinton turmoil Question: I would have written ''Clinton's turmoil''. Why didn't the author use apostrophe? BY CRAIG GORDON AND TOM BRUNE | <email addresses removed by mod.> August 13, 2008 Question: Why is semicolon used instead of comma to separate...

Hi Nghiatran and welcome to the forums. You seem to have some problems with plurals and articles. You need to be careful about saying something WILL happen, instead of CAN happen. There are some negative effects in using computer in our life. First of all, using computer in all of important...

If you are writing a news piece think about who you are writing it for and why. Is this to promote the new car? Is it to provide Oleg Datskiv with a good opportunity to comment on it? Is it to provide a basic facts and figures guide? Is it aimed at people who might want to buy the car? Or at the...

Hi Mister Micawber , Here was my friends original use of the word: Thanks for the article about Russia and the fairly non-informative email. To which I replied with some light-hearted taunting: ...Also, the proper antonym of informative is uninformative. If we venture too...

"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society." The speaker claims that the destiny of society is determined by how children are socialized today, however, we...

Hello MrP. I hope you don't mind that I continue with the secondaries: 2) b) “I must admit, I have a little trouble here. Are you able to put it into words for a simpleton, so I can ponder the meaning before returning to your text?” The thing is as follows: if I’m a global sceptic, then I’m...

Hi MrP, how are you doing? Thanks for your last corrections of my paper, which I sent some days ago. I’m finishing another paper, and I have quite a few doubts. There are a couple of long paragraphs. Hope this is not a problem: 1) “Bett, as well as Annas, uses the term “modern” to designate...

Thanks for your answer. Finally, I can send the paper till Monday-Tuesday (end of the month). I have some more doubts. Here they are: 1) “We say that the causal principle of the Skeptical is the hope of becoming unperturbed. For men of talent, perturbed by the anomaly in things and being in...

Pot of Gold Information Technology jobs' going overseas to China, India or some Asian subcontinent is a topic that brings about feelings of anxiety and deceit among those directly affected by these economic changes. After all, Americans are losing high paying jobs because corporations are...