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Hello, I am going to put my suggestions and corrections next to your words, but they will be in bold, in paraenthese, and on the right side of the word(s) so you know which word and what my suggestion is. Is that ok with you? Tell me what you think. Also, in case you did not notice, you seem to...

Greetings,I have a pretty big favour to ask.I've been struggling with this topic for quite awhile now.It goes without saying that my English "leaves something to be desired".Having in mind the subtle differences that occur from using particular tenses, I have often wondered how the...

Memos show Clinton turmoilQuestion: I would have written ''Clinton's turmoil''. Why didn't the author use apostrophe?BY CRAIG GORDON AND TOM BRUNE | <email addresses removed by mod.>August 13, 2008Question: Why is semicolon used instead of comma to separate the email...

Dear Ray,many thanks for your help! And great point! I done some modificatios according to your comments..==HTML clipboardInternational tourism is increasingly popular nowadays because of the highly developed world transportation system, commercialization and many other factors. But at the...

International tourism is increasingly popular nowadays because of the highly developed world transportation system, commercialization and many other factors. But at the same time, controversy has arisen over whether international tourism has more benefits than drawbacks. Some assert that...

Can any one help me out for this paragraph? I would like to make it like "an academic writing". thank you.A CASE STUDY OF COMPUTING APPRAISALS IN DESIGN TEXT Xiong Wang and Andy Dong 11.8122 Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 The research...

Here's my take on your paragraph.Famine is not uncommon in Africa. In fact, every year we hear the cries of the African people either on TV, in the newspaper or through charitable organizations. The word Africa conjures up an the image of poverty, starvation, disease s, malnutrition, and lack...

Yes, I saw your comments in the forum, thanks for that, that made me check some of the reviews on the internet and they are pretty mixed. Think I'll save the money or wait until it has improved so much that it's worth buying (hey, even Windows became decent eventually...). One might...

Here is one paragraph. Thanks The situation described in this study reveals a negative social relationship between head teachers and teachers. The head teachers see the teachers as unwilling to participate because they are preoccupied with earning money outside the school. Even if the teachers...

Hi Would you please correct the following paragraph for me? Thanks for your assistance The social trap is a situation where it is not possible to find optimal outcomes or optimal ways forward because the parties concerned lack the social capital and the trust needed to make progress. The...