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Dear BBG - Please try to be careful when you write. If you don't think carefully about every word you write, you will not learn why you make mistakes. Think about tenses - present, past, future. Think about plurals - is this one, or more than one? If it is more than one, add an 's'....

Bilsonx wrote: Ok well I fixed most of the basic stuff you said. Could you maybe tell me how i could fix the others? My first Wreck in my new car My friend Brandon and I was . After this close call I have learned to drive super careful in the snow and slow down when bigger size...

Numerous too weak a word - more than numerous literary works have been created since stories first began to be written down. Though the number of literary works is endless not exactly endless - it's a finite number , works of fiction are often more popular among young readers. Are the works...

Hi, as this is your English assignment I won't correct it for you, but I will help out a little by highlighting the errors for you to fix in the first few paragraphs. Your main problems seem to be verb tenses and plurals. You should also try to reduce your repetition of the word...

In the first one, what follows immediately after the verb is a plural - paragraphs. In the second one, what follows immedately after the verb is "an opening" - clearly singular. Although you can argue "an opening and closing" is clearly plural, having a plural verb right before "an opening"...

Hi, First of all, write a headline to your essay because the effect of gap between rich and poor is the subject of the argumentative esssay it is not a headline.In your first paragraph you don't tell us what you will talk about I mean, there is a gap between them but what kind of a gap is...

Too long to go through but double check your verb tenses and use of plural/singular forms and articles. I've amended the first paragraph for you. Mobile phones generate electromagnetic waves when we make a call. The electromagnetic wave can also be called an electromagnetic field, (microwaves...

Well, just looking at the first couple of paragraphs you need to work primarily on plural/singular forms, use of articles, prepositions and verb tenses. And don't fall into the trap of thinking that 'whom' is just a more formal version of 'who'. It isn't and you are using it incorrectly. So, the...

You have problems with determiners, plurals, verb tenses, prepositions and general grammatical structure. I've corrected the first paragraph for you and highlighed problems in the second. In the second paragraph you have started inserting a space before commas, which is incorrect. The...

However, it would be unfair to say that the two books cover two totally separate aspects of the revolution ; they do share some common ground . Both books begin with a fair by making a reference to the development of the modern society that follows ( the Congress of Vienna and Revolutions of...