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Hi,A15The narrator thought that his father 1) believed that he was the luckiest man in the world.2) was a knowledgeable and highly qualified man.3) succeeded in almost everything he did.4) didn’t mind being called a lucky man.It's not a well-framed question. The narrator changes his mind...

Hi! This is one of the parts from the Russian national exam on English. Some teachers find it difficult and say that even a native speaker'd have problems with it. I can't understand why they think so. Dear native speakers here, if you have a couple of spare minutes, read the text below...

The following is a supporting paragraph in an essay "Why do people attend college". I think the last sentence is not coherent with the topic. If omitting it, i think the passage will be too short. How to do? Thank you! Next, more education means more money. According to the US Census...

Hi, Dean Good essay. Here are my ideas. (Also, did you want "context" instead of "contex"?) Since then, Medicines Australia has strengthened the code by reviewing it several times and making some changes, including the addition have been made such as an addition of a monitoring mechanism which...

Hello everybody, This is the final part of my work. Timing issues and MY ESSAY Time could kill your essay as well as bad structure and poor vocabulary. But do not try to kill time yourself. Allow no more than a minute for panicking, sweating and jittering, then stop. Has it put down a single...

Hi Astrid, welcome to the forums. Your letter is well written and concise - which is important - but I did notice some mistakes. It might help you to look at MountainHiker's advice on writing a letter of motivation. Consider this alternative for paragraph two: "Contemporary society in general,...

Dear Sir or Madam, Having a flair for marketing, I wish to apply for a MA programme in marketing in September 2005. I will be graduating with BA degree in International Business from Vaasa Polytechnic University in May 2005. My career objective is to become a faculty member at a leading...

Dear Mr. MountainHiker Thank you very much again for your time and precious suggestions. I have made some modifications. Could you please take a look again? Paragraph one is about my objective, paragraph two is about what I have learned in previous university regarding other aspects, paragraph...

Wang Mengjie (Ms.), First, I trust you have read the top two posts in this section of the forum? I want to be sure that you are willing to have you information available to world at large and have it remain so. Second, your essay is very chaotic. It needs some structure. You need to simplify...

Whenever something bothers me, I write about it. Aside from working part time and putting myself through school, my interests primarily involve freelance writing and the completion of my memoir. I have submitted several articles and opinion pages to print and on-line magazines, local newspapers...