By Paragraphs, Proofreading

Essay topic: Identify three crucial elements in works of non-fiction and justify your choices with evidence. Numerous amounts of literary works have been created since stories began to be written down. Though the number of literary works is endless, the type of writing is either divided into...

He could not get rid of her off his mind > He could not get her off his mind expresses this more fluentlywhy Jane feels so repulsive to > repulsed by wandering nowhere > wandering all over the place or went nowhereHis mother thought > His mother thinks At last birthday...

From the bottom of my heart, I'm grateful for your help. Would you help me to fix the paragraph below? After I read 'Catcher in the Rye', I asked myself what was it. Then I had to find out what Holden meant 'catcher in the rye'. Even though I found it somewhere, I still didn't understand how it...

Extreme Makeover: Home Edition is a (truly is a hollow adjective here) superb reality show that first aired on December 3, 2003. Each 60 minute episode features a team of designers, contractors and several hundred workers who must race against time: (you could subsititute the colon with a...

Ever since its birth, this dog has been with Larry. Now, the dog was malodorous, old, crippled and blind, but Larry was always with it. (The adj. stinky is too colloquial to be employed in written English.) Larry's roommate, John, wanted to get rid of the dog because he was bothered by the...

Just the first two paragraphs: In Indian culture marriage is a process that is decided on by the parents. The parents look for an individual that has a good reputation, well educated (parallel), amount of money and many other factors. The children believe the parents are wiser and would make a...

It still needs work-- or at least, proofreading. I have emboldened problem areas below: Health is more important than wealth. Health is the necessary condition while wealth is the sufficient condition. We need both of them , in order to live happily . Bus as you can will see below,...

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. A feminist approach to the breast cancer experience is not a completely new topic within the academic tribe <<< this word strikes a note of light humour in the Anglo-American world. However, it is important to highlight three main arguments in defense of my...

In a translation I am proofreading I found the following (in the original): “Likewise, they were liable to pursue further studies under the guidance of a mentor either to sharpen their paper and pencil skills, which involved mathematics and accounting or time-keeping…” “they were placed at...

I've been going over this paragraph and I need a fresh eye. The study examines the impact of the 1992 social upheaval in Los Angeles following the Rodney King verdict on artistic expression. Through contextualizing the issues of identity formation as influenced by the 1992 social upheaval in...