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Hi I will appreciate if someone can review my paragraphs and let me know if there are any grammatical mistakes and also please provide me some explanation to those errors Regards Deepak Paragraph 1 Performing server side development using

hey people i need some correction and some advices. i have some paragraphs but i think that these paragraphs can be more effective and more literarisch. What do you advise? How could we make these better? I need to find a way tell this in a more

In following paragraph,which I quoted from the book, "Principles of economics", I think the verb in "that was the main" should be were not was. Am I right? The energy crisis of the 1970s, too, was blamed on nature's

Please give me some comments. Last night, I went over to Emily's house. My parents went out, so I went there to sleep overnight. We slept soundly. Suddenly, I was awakened by a sound. I was scared, so I woke up my friend too. I heard a sound

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Uli: I have made a few suggetions. You could do a better job of organizing your letter in paragraphs with one main idea. Also, if you made shorter sentences, it may be less stilted and more fluent. Please also pay attention to punctuation. All

Do you mean another paragraph? I think your message is complete - you have told them when, why, and then another sentence asking for approval. That's all you need! Best regards, A- s