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I work for an online editing and proofreading service Please see my profile for more information I won t revise all the paragraphs here but I will show you the changes I would make in the first paragraph followed by an explanation Most smokers become short of breath when they exercise or when...

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Leolyy wrote hi Goodman it seems that you feel it not easy to alter and modify the paragraph of my test essay even though you have written a new one in addition you have not modified on it why i cant understand because i think that it is easier to alter than to re create the only reason i can...

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Hi Anne Yes it does refer to pronunciation but also to writing and faulty diction is a factor in proof reading and essay marking http webster commnet edu writing symbols htm and http www woodward edu english stand htm The ideas organization and style of the F paper fall far below what is...

Bunny I have gone through your essay and made some comments It looks scattered to me Not well thought out I have also started a second iteration You need to decide which one you want to work with and make the essay flow smoother You are about to graduate from university in a business program You...

Hi Zackhou Can you tell us more about your essay I trust you are an adult living in Vancouver Canada This essay is for an English class My friend Sam is living with his parents though he has an ideal job and earns a reasonable income I will live with my parents until I am married Sam claimed...

Dear Sir or Madam I am applying for the Engineering program Diplome d Ingenieur at a member institution of N I I graduated in Automation with a bachelor degree in 2003 from the university of Science and Technology My study focuses on Control Theory Distributed and Process Control Meanwhile I also...

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I don t think English is that complicated really I think the main problem is that it just has way too many exceptions It s a partly deteriorated hodge podge of a language and so its difficulty it seems to me lies not in the complexity of its grammar but rather in its lack of unity and order I do...