Here is your corrected paragraph. I kept to your words where possible. The strikethrough letters are your original words and the color bar words are my replacements. Is the mark "(7)" used as a footnote indicator? I do not believe that

Bobby Juilfs Professor Kramer Fine Arts 101 16 November 2009 Undergrowth with Two Figures If you could ask Vincent van Gogh what he accomplished in his lifetime he would probably say not much. But we know now that van Gogh gave

Would you please be so kind as to correct this little text for me ? Please ... I need a correction in two days and I can give you a little donation for the effort . I put some alternatives and comments in brackets and parentheses . Thank you so

second para is perfectly ok from side The second paragraph is not OK– it has three spelling mistakes and is in mixed registers.

Anon, check your spelling. The. Counselor. Dance. Nearly. Look for other mistakes. Leave a blank line between your paragraphs. It's two positions, so make that plural. I have enclosed or I am enclosing.

The story “Tears of Autumn” by Yoshiko Uchida is a great story, which the settings affect the story by many ways. This story is mostly about a young woman gone to America from Japan for freedom and marriage. The settings affect the story a lot as

The story “Tears of Autumn” by Yoshiko Uchida is a great story, which the settings affect the story by many ways. This story is mostly about a young woman gone to America from Japan for freedom and marriage. The settings affect the story a lot as

I grew up in a rural portion of India until the age of nine and I recall my family was in the midst of middle to lower class, and sometimes, in the latter. My father was the bread winner, and he did whatever he could to provide for me and my three

Question Leaders like JFK and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice. An Important Leader From

This all makes sense. There's not much wrong, just a few minor grammatical and spelling mistakes: I am working on my August schedule and trying to set up agency calls so when I start on August 3 , I can go out and be productive. Last