Hi, Start by writing your top 3 reasons, each in a separate paragraph beginnng with I want to be accepted into this program because . . . Then write a paragraph that starts with I want to study at XXX University because . . .

Hi, Sorry, but this is no better than before. No educated English speaker would write a letter like this with just one paragraph. And no university would bother to read it. They'd just throw it in the garbage. Do you care about

Hi, It's up to you, but most letters of this kind have more than one paragraph. You yourself wrote two. Your first paragraph begins by focusing on your past history, instead of on your present and future. In your second, you

Hi, Here are a few suggestions. Structure it like an esaay. Paragraph 1 introduction say what degree you are applying for Paragraph 2 Say why you want to do that degree in that field Paragraph 3 Say why

It is important to have specific dreams and thought in life when i was in birth place and school, a lot of kids like me wanted to float the air. but i was aware that is not possible. so i asked to my mother to buy a TV because that time

Can someone or teacher please check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday), October 29, 2009. This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. Thank you.

Can someone or teacher please check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday), October 29, 2009. This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. Thank you.

Can someone or teacher check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday). This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. My Hometown Everybody

Would you please be so kind as to correct this little text for me ? Please ... I need a correction in two days and I can give you a little donation for the effort . I put some alternatives and comments in brackets and parentheses . Thank you so

last paragraph... (I explain what i expect from a Msc programm. and what my future plans are when i finish this programm..) next .. .. I hope Reading University will give me this opportunity and embody me in its high quality academic