Search results for 'tag:Paragraphs' matching tag 'Paragraphs'

Writing skills tutorials request

socialbutterfly — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 22:52:17 GMT

I need to improve my english writing skills for PR_business purposes.. (writing press releases. articles.. and so on...) how do you think I can do that.. ?? read, attend a course.. or read a certain book..?? thx in advance.

Re: Need help with a paragraph about what I do in my spare time

khoff — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 00:36:56 GMT

We need you guys who ask for help to do it politely, which involves the word "please," please. If you have been asked to describe yourself, your interests and activities, there is really no way to avoid using "I" frequently.

Surely not!

grammar geek — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 20:39:56 GMT

This is for people who grade, practice for or who have taken the FCE. In other forum, I saw this advice posted to someone who had written a draft paragraph: Hey, its not too bad but you should use more colloquial expresions like wanna, gotta, kinda etc. and i wouldnt use expresions like could, would because in my opinion its too formal. You can also use more colloquial words, there are a lot of websites, just use google :) And dont forget that you dont want to be like other FCE participants, you want to capture FCE commission In a later post in the same thread, he says, And as I said you can say instead of I am -> I'm or as soon as possible-> a.s.a.p. The more colloquial grammar and words you learn, the...

Re: Introducing 'Magnum960'.

zun — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 08:29:39 GMT

Hi Bobby, i've just read ur correction at a paragraph, i used to be not clear when reading the first but latter in adjustment one i got it . Welcome to e.forums . All best

Grammer

belty341 — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 04:03:14 GMT

Good Morning ! This is be informed that as per the go concierge Mr. Carlo Logli supose to arrive by flight number EY 004 at 07:20 am , But there were no flight number 004 today as per Ms. Princess in Etihad Airways, EY 004 is coming tomorrow morning at 07:30 am and it is confirmed with guest name by Ms. Princess. Thank You, could you tel me is there any mistakes above paragraph ?

Re: One paragraph, please

doctor d — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 02:20:24 GMT

Here is your corrected paragraph. I kept to your words where possible. The strikethrough letters are your original words and the color bar words are my replacements. Is the mark "(7)" used as a footnote indicator? I do not believe that is that standard format for footnote numbers. I did not check the spelling of your medical terms, so you should doublecheck them yourself. Pneumocephalus is the presence of air or gas within the cranial cavity. It is usually associated with disruption of the skull: after a head or and facial trauma, when there are (in the cases of) tumors of the skull base, after neurosurgery or otorhinolaryngology. It rarely occurs spontaneously. and rarely spontaneously (7). The clinical presentation...

Need lots of help with punctuation please

magnum960 — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 01:16:22 GMT

Bobby Juilfs Professor Kramer Fine Arts 101 16 November 2009 Undergrowth with Two Figures If you could ask Vincent van Gogh what he accomplished in his lifetime he would probably say not much. But we know now that van Gogh gave the world a gift. He is now one of the most recognized painters of all time for his exquisite masterpieces that went somewhat unrecognized in his time. They are now and will forever be considered fine works of art. According to Encyclopedia Britannica Online, Vincent van Gogh painted over 800 paintings and sketched over 700 drawings in his troubled life ( par. 18) . Undergrowth with Two Figures was finished in France Jun 1890 and was one of the last paintings van Gogh completed...

Re: GRAMMER

clive — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 14:54:03 GMT

Hi, In case you are keeping/holding any Invoices for the year 2009, please submit to Finance department with complete documents on or before the 29 th of November 2009 in order to record the expenses before the year end closing IS THERE A ANY WRONG ABOVE PARAGRAPH ? If you are holding any invoices for the year 2009, please submit them to the Finance department with complete documentation on or before the 29th of November in order to record the expenses before the year-end closing. Best wishes, Clive

GRAMMER

belty341 — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 14:48:35 GMT

In case you are keeping/holding any Invoices for the year 2009, please submit to Finance department with complete documents on or before the 29 th of November 2009 in order to record the expenses before the year end closing IS THERE A ANY WRONG ABOVE PARAGRAPH ?

One paragraph, please

antonija — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 21:11:18 GMT

Can you please check this paragraph. Is the underlined part clear? Should I omitt the part in brackets? Thank you in advance Pneumocephalus is the presence of air or gas within the cranial cavity. It is usually associated with disruption of the skull: after a head and facial trauma, (in the cases of) tumors of the skull base, after neurosurgery or otorhinolaryngology, and rarely spontaneously (7). The clinical presentation usually varies and includes headache, seizures, double vision, weaknes, meningeal signs, ataxia, and a frontal lobe syndrome (7).

Correcting paragragh

sunnyshiny — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 19:22:05 GMT

hey all, if it is possible for you. please help me to correctthis paragraph. thanks "In our society, responsibility for growing up children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community. As well as having a healthy society, having a good family has a great influence because family is a small part of community. This question that who are more responsible in having children, need to survey carefully. I believe fathers and mothers has the same duty on their children. "

Re: Urgent Help needed A letter for a job, need help correcting it, I looked over it already

doctor d — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 04:39:39 GMT

To whom i t this may concern: I was contact ed by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator. First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only assume that as a moderator one you must be under a lot of pressure. I've had my fair share of pressure over the past few fews years , whether it was working in an office where I had to satisfy the client ' s demands or working at a fast food chain where client interaction during rush hour , for instance , was one of the main aspects of the job. Being able to maintain composure is also something that I've learned learnt as a poker player and

avangi — Sat, 31 Oct 2009 04:08:49 GMT

Yes, the "to" is necessary. (Otherwise, it sounds like an adjective. What is a pursuant paragraph?) It works like, "This is being done according to rule fourteen."

Re: Combinations with "unparalleled"

meowth — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 20:01:43 GMT

I agree with you. Exercises in our books are made in such a way that we should use all the adectives of current unit in small paragraph. That's why such strange word combinations take place.

Need your help in constructing a grammar

englishmenrob — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 07:18:35 GMT

Hi, i need help with somebody else.I need to know? if this paragraph are correct or not? I am responsible in teaching grade 1 student's .Especially, Computer class and in addition with that; I was also a Computer Maintenance where in I was the one responsible in troubleshooting a Computer as well as basic networking like installing router etc.

Re: Sentence correction please

pleasehelp — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 06:59:07 GMT

Does everything have to be in full sentences? I mean African Americans have their own English lingos and they can describe a whole paragraph in a few words. What's the difference between Black English and Standard American English?

Re: Check the grammer of this paragraph.

akmal — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 05:13:41 GMT

As per requirement of Billing department data had been provided on 26/05/2009. But no response given by billing Department on telephone calls and oral convesation with Mr. XYX. Therefore issue has been closed by IT department.