Hello, I enjoyed reading your essay, it appears that it is a descriptive essay...am I correct? The main task that you seemed to want to complete was to provide vivid details of your experience, in order to help the reader feel like they could

English is a difficult language to adopt as a second language for so many reasons. Your point about learning Japanese is irrelevant to this 'why English is difficult' conversation. In places like Canada, did you know the reason for having

I'm Australian, and it's always 'tanned' here. But I would contend that is what it's intended to be in American English, too. I always used to read/hear 'tanned' in American media and books, and it's only in recent

Wow, this was a really powerful essay. As I read through your paper I was easily able to imagine you as a war general, making an inspirational speech before battle to his soldiers. Keep up with the strong creativity in your papers, it makes it

Hello Jamillah, let me start off first by complimenting you on a really heartfelt essay, often times when you're reading something, it can be hard to feel attached to the writer's experience, because they don't capture the emotion of

my name is Dhia' Alharazneh , I'm a twenty-four years old , I live in amman with my family , I was born in salt at ninteen eighty-five . I graduated two years ago in june two thousand seven from hashemite university and I have a

Hello Vctory Ong, I enjoyed reading your essay, I think you're an imaginative writer who is skilled at making the place you are describing seem real. Here are some of the errors I noticed in your essay. We enjoys, they dances, jogs...

Hello, I appreciate some of your writing, I especially like your ability to use adjectives to bring your nouns to life! There are a couple of things I would like to point out. Last night, I ran into a dog family. I'm unsure what "dog

Hi, I need some help on making this response sound more intellectual, please help me. Explain below why you believe you should be considered a disadvantaged applicant: I grew up in rural India until the age of nine . At that

First of all, I want to thank you for your time. May god reward you. Does this sound better? . During the transition stage, we moved multiple times trying to settle but things become more unstable and life came to a halt when my father was