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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Past perfect tag:Constructions' matching tags 'Past perfect' and 'Constructions'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aPast+perfect+tag%3aConstructions&amp;tag=Past+perfect,Constructions&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Past perfect tag:Constructions' matching tags 'Past perfect' and 'Constructions'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)</generator><item><title>Re: to focus - Passive or Active voice?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/FocusPassiveActiveVoice/gcmgc/post.htm#514524</link><pubDate>Fri, 16 May 2008 17:58:01 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:514524</guid><dc:creator>CalifJim</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Lone Swordsman&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;i&gt;All this time &lt;b&gt;John&amp;#39;s [John has] been focused on&lt;/b&gt; blah-blah-blah...&lt;/i&gt; &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;...&lt;i&gt;All this time &lt;b&gt;John&amp;#39;s [John is] focused on&lt;/b&gt; blah-blah-blah...&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt; Passive?&amp;nbsp; No.&amp;nbsp; There&amp;#39;s nothing passive here, because there is no agent either implicit or explicit (i.e., there is nobody who is doing something).  &lt;i&gt;focused&lt;/i&gt; is an adjective.&amp;nbsp; Be careful.&amp;nbsp; Not every word with &lt;i&gt;-ed&lt;/i&gt; is a verb in every sentence where it occurs.&amp;nbsp; These two sentences are just the same statement in two different tenses.&amp;nbsp; Note these:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;John is ...&lt;/i&gt;&amp;nbsp; [present]&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;John was ...&lt;/i&gt; [past]&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;John will be ...&lt;/i&gt; [future]&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;John has been ...&lt;/i&gt; [present perfect]&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;John had been ...&lt;/i&gt; [past perfect]&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Complete any of the phrases above by adding any of these: &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;frightened of snakes, interested in science, focused on his studies, tired of reading, fascinated by insects, bored with grammar.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;None of the resulting sentences has a passive construction.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;CJ&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: Reported Speech</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ReportedSpeech/zpmxj/post.htm#495015</link><pubDate>Mon, 31 Mar 2008 17:36:47 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:495015</guid><dc:creator>miriam</dc:creator><description>Hello. Sorry to hear you&amp;#39;re feeling uncomfortable with this type of activity. But you&amp;#39;re not alone: I would be, too!&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;The sentences lack context, which makes it difficult to tell when tense changes are necessary and when they are not (among other things).&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;There is one sentence that is wrong without a doubt: # 7. The sentence in direct speech uses the present continuous, and the reporting verb (added) is in the past tense, so it really makes no sense to use a construction with &amp;quot;will&amp;quot; to report that statement. You should either keep the same tense (present continuous) or change to past continuous. Sentence #6 has a similar mistake. The decision, however, is sometimes difficult to make since I have no idea when the original statements were made, when they are/were reported, and, also important, whether what was said still applies at the time of reporting or it doesn&amp;#39;t.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;The rest of the sentences seem OK in general, except for a few details, such as dates and time references, and person changes. For example, in # 8 you retain &amp;quot;a year ago&amp;quot; instead of changing it to some other expression like &amp;quot;the year before&amp;quot; or &amp;quot;the previous year&amp;quot;. Again, though, that would depend on several variables, the moment of reporting among them. Also, in #10 you changed &amp;quot;our customers&amp;quot; to &amp;quot;his customers&amp;quot; (why not &amp;quot;their&amp;quot; customers?).&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;And you&amp;#39;re not consistent with verb changes. In # 1, you shifted from the present perfect to the past perfect. But then, in other sentences, such as # 2, you retained the tense from the sentence in direct speech.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I know this isn&amp;#39;t much help, but it will -hopefully- point you in the direction of your mistakes and/or inconsistencies.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;When we&amp;#39;re taught indirect speech, we&amp;#39;re told to remember the &amp;quot;golden rule&amp;quot;: change verb tenses. But the truth is that it always depends on the context and the content itself, on the people speaking and the time of speaking.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Give these sentences another try, please, and let&amp;#39;s see what happens?&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Miriam&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: He said that the train had left before he arrived at the station.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SaidTrainLeftArrivedStation/zpjlg/post.htm#494094</link><pubDate>Fri, 28 Mar 2008 17:35:26 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:494094</guid><dc:creator>Goodman</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;Hi Anon, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p style="COLOR:#111111;"&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#111111;"&gt;We are not particularly interested in finding if someone is happy with our answers. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;So&lt;sup&gt; &lt;/sup&gt;&lt;strong&gt;âIâd be happy ifâ¦â&lt;/strong&gt; does sound aweful to my ears. I had made this comment before and I am not sure you were the same poster. But I would make another attempt to make this point. If you want to be polite, Just say something likeâ I will appreciate anyoneâs help on &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;my questionsâ or something in that effect.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;Here are my comments relating to your questions.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;Mainly, all 3 bear the same core meaning without the nitty gritty on tense and indirectness.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;It would be correct If the sentence was â &lt;/span&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:green;"&gt;The train had left the staion before he arrived atâ¦&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:green;"&gt;â.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;All 3 are correct in the sense that they are grammatical, but B, with a double past perfect construction is unneccesary. Itâs good enough to say â&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#444444;"&gt;He said that the train had left before he &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="TEXT-DECORATION:underline;"&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:red;"&gt;had&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#444444;"&gt; arrived at the stationâ, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;or use simple use simple past tense&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#444444;"&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:red;"&gt;I&amp;#39;d be happy if &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#444444;"&gt;someone would answer my question- not a good phrase to use! IMO.&lt;img id="@@emo@@" alt="(:() Sad" src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-6.gif" /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: PASSIVE</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Passive/2/zknmc/Post.htm#470698</link><pubDate>Wed, 30 Jan 2008 18:45:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:470698</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Newguest wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;I'd like to ask you about the passive voice.

&lt;p&gt;1. People believe that the president was very shy as a child.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;The president is believed to &lt;strong&gt;have been&lt;/strong&gt; very shy as a child.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I'M WONDERING WHEN I CAN USE &lt;strong&gt;HAD BEEN&lt;/strong&gt;?&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;I don't think anyone has mentioned this.&amp;nbsp; My apologies if someone has already mentioned the fact that '&lt;b&gt;to have been&lt;/b&gt;' is not a passive construction in your sentence.&amp;nbsp; It is a &lt;b&gt;perfect infinitive.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;The use of a perfect infinitive does not automatically equate to the past perfect.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;And, of course, you cannot say 'to had been'.&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Past perfect or simple past</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PastPerfectOrSimplePast/zkvmv/post.htm</link><pubDate>Wed, 23 Jan 2008 20:57:28 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:468099</guid><dc:creator>Rotter</dc:creator><description>&lt;font size="2"&gt;&lt;b&gt;The sole survivor of the car crash which killed
Princess Diana said Dodi Al Fayed had insisted on the ill-fated decoy
plan to dodge waiting paparazzi.&lt;/b&gt;
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Trevor Rees said he had had reservations about Mr Al Fayed's plan to sneak out of the Ritz Hotel.&lt;/b&gt; 
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;He suffered serious head injuries and made a good
recovery but has said he has little memory of events which led up to
Diana and Mr Al Fayed's deaths. &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Giving evidence at their inquest, he denied being part of a murder cover-up.

&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Mr Rees, who was known as Rees-Jones at the time of the
crash on 31 August 1997, told the jury he went along with the plan
because Dodi had talked about leaving the Paris hotel with no security. &lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Waiting photographers&lt;/b&gt;
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;The jury has heard the decoy plan involved two cars,
including a Mercedes with an official driver, waiting at the front of
the hotel opposite a crowd of photographers. &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;The couple would then leave in a third car from the rear of the hotel, driven by Henri Paul, who was not an official driver. &lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;The plan failed as there were already photographers
waiting at the back and it meant the car left without a trained driver
and a decoy car. &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Mr Rees said he could not remember if Mr Al Fayed or Mr
Paul first told him of the plan but was sure the idea had come from the
former. &lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;Please look at the sentences in bold.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;Diana said Dody Al Fayed had insisted on the ill-fated ...&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;Trevor Rees said he had had reservations about Mr Al Fayed's plan to ...&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;The above are past perfect constructions.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;Is it imperative to write past perfect in the given context?&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000" size="2"&gt;What is wrong with the following:&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;Diana said Dody Al Fayed insisted on the ill-fated ...&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;Trevor Rees said he had reservations about Mr Al Fayed's plan to ...&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: if clause</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/IfClause/zjmgk/post.htm#465402</link><pubDate>Thu, 17 Jan 2008 12:31:03 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:465402</guid><dc:creator>Hoa Thai</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Devrim55 wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;p&gt;If we ...........ready for the YDS exam decently, we .........at least two and a half hours a day for reading questions.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;a)were to get / should have spared&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;b)got / would have spared&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;c)are to get / had spared&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;d)have gotten / would spare&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;e)have to get / must have spared&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;thanks in advance...&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;Hi,&lt;br&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Here is a structure of conditional sentences:&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;b&gt;if &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement, result statement.&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;From that structure, we have 4 basic conditional constructions:
&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type zero - &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; present simple, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; present simple.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type I â &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; present simple, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; shall / will / can/ may +
base verb.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type II â &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; past simple, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; should / would / could /
might + base verb.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type III â &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; past perfect, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; should / would / could / might
+ have + past participle.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;None of the 5 choices matches with any pattern shown above.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: We have been here since 7 o'clock until now</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SinceOclockUntil/zwpzn/post.htm#461342</link><pubDate>Mon, 07 Jan 2008 05:41:11 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:461342</guid><dc:creator>CalifJim</dc:creator><description>My mistake.&amp;nbsp; I, too, mistakenly read the sentence as &lt;i&gt;... since 7 o'clock until now&lt;/i&gt;.&amp;nbsp;
It was that construction I called redundant -- or believed at the time
that I was calling redundant.&amp;nbsp; But no matter.&amp;nbsp; The version
with &lt;i&gt;... from 7 o'clock until now&lt;/i&gt; is equally redundant, in my opinion.&amp;nbsp; The past perfect already means &lt;i&gt;until now&lt;/i&gt;.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
All variants with &lt;i&gt;from&lt;/i&gt; are inferior to those with &lt;i&gt;since&lt;/i&gt;.&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
The only version that is completely idiomatic to my ear is&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;i&gt;We have been here since 7 o'clock.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
CJ&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>(Unknown 22884)OHHH I FINALLY CAN POST!!!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Unknown22884OhhhFinallyPost/zhlxk/post.htm</link><pubDate>Fri, 21 Dec 2007 01:51:40 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:455423</guid><dc:creator>Jen001</dc:creator><description>&lt;P dir=ltr&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;"The Change of the Characteristics in the passage from &lt;EM&gt;The Hours&lt;/EM&gt;"&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The passage from the novel &lt;I&gt;The Hours&lt;/I&gt; by Michael Cunningham is intriguing. The passage illustrates the difference between the character's characteristics in different time settings: past and present. This difference is clearly shown through the contrasting structure, imagery and language.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The structure reflects the division of the time setting and helps to contrast the different characteristics. The passage has two paragraphs, each describing the character's thoughts and perception about a same place, of the past and present. The length of each paragraph is different; the one from the past is much longer than the other one from the&amp;nbsp; present. This can be related to each of the paragraph's sentence construction. In the first paragraph, about the past, the lengths of the sentences are very long. The first sentence takes eight lines, lengthened continuously within commas, semi-colons and colons. In fact, in one sentence, there are five commas, five semi-colons and a colon. This overly-continued sentence gives a sense of unfiltered, informal, and unrestricted flowing of thoughts. Moreover, the use of brackets, âsome sort of wood(cedar? Camphor?),â seems to be less sophisticated, compared to using dashes or other punctuations of the same function. However, in the second paragraph of the present, the sentence construction is shown contrastingly. The paragraph starts with a short simple sentence: âShe turns down Bleecker, goes up Thomson.â Also, in this paragraph, there are four sentences in six lines, and three of the four sentences are written in simple sentence, including the example above. Although there are a few commas in some of the sentences, there is no semi-colon, but only a colon in the last sentence. The colon is used in a very appropriate way, functioning to introduce the list of âthingsâ, such as âjewelryâ and âjackets.â Thus, within the brief and concise sentence construction, the character in the present appears to be more mature, filtered and sophisticated than in the past. However, as a result of that, the sense of youthful, unfiltered freedom cannot be found anymore in the present.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; In addition to the structure, the contrasting imagery of each paragraph demonstrates further differences of the characteristic in the past and present. As both paragraphs are of the same setting, the image of the same place is described at each time. So, the consistent place makes the comparison between the two more distinctive and reliable. The imagery of the place is very vivid in the past, not only within the visual sense, but also within the auditory and olfactory senses, whereas that of the past only relies on the sense of sight. For example, in the past, âthe neighborhoodâ is depicted as âthe center of something new and wildâ in âthe city where the sound of guitars drifted all nightâ and âwhere the stores â¦ smelled the way â¦ Arab bazaars must smell.â This is detail, imaginative and lively, even the âArab bazaarsâ creates a somewhat mystical and adventurous atmosphere. This interesting and passionate depiction is being minimized in the present into three words: an âimitation of itself.â It is now âa watered-down carnival for tourists,â which gives a sense of inactivity and boredom. Also, the stores now âall sell essentially the same things,â such as âsouvenir T-shirts.â This seems to be dull, with no excitement or creativity or passion. This changed imagery, depicted by the character, rather shows the change in the character's perception. The change in perception is demonstrated more clearly within the notion of the âdoorâ and âalley.â In the past, she says, âif you passed through the wrong door or down the wrong alley you would meet a fate,â however, in the present, she âknows that behind these doors, and down these alleys lies nothing more or less than people living their lives.â In the past, she seems to be more concerned with the 'inner' world of thought or imagination. Whereas in the present, she seems to be more grounded in the external world of physical reality. As like the previously discussed change in the sentence structure, she is now more sophisticated, knowledgeable and realistic than the past. Also, as like the image of the place, her perception changed from the creative, interesting and adventurous to the boring, predictable and filtered way. Thus, the contrasting imagery of the past and present reflects the similar change in the character's perception.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; While the structure and the imagery convey the distinctive change in the characteristics of the character, the contrasting use of language supports those differences. More specifically, the diction [dash]shown in the past and the present[dash] is comparable. Reflecting the imagery of the varied senses, the words and expressions used in the past are also varied and animated, such as âincense and richâ and âdung-y dustâ describing the smell of the stores. These two expressions, âincense and richâ and âdung-y dustâ are contrasting; they express the diversity of the object. Moreover, the speaker creates a non-existing adjective, âdung-y.â The extra adding of â-yâ grants a more animated image, and it gives a sense of freedom and even somewhat childishness. The âsmellâ is then described as âsomething fruitily, fertilely rotting.â Again, she creates a non-existing adverb, âfruitily,â expressing the scent rather vividly, which would be sour as it ârots.â The other adverb âfertilelyâ contributes to create a sense of abundance and richness of the imagery. However, the use of those two positive adverbs, modifying the negative verb ârottingâ seems to be oxymoron in âfruit[full]â or âfertile,â as well as the use of adjective âdisreputable,â following ânew and wild.â The oxymoron adds an unpredictable sense to the imagery and hence to the depicter's thoughts. On the other hand, in the present, the adjectives used to describe the âcityâ and the âstores,â are ânothing,â âless,â âsame,â and âstill.â All of them are negative and reflect the boredom, dullness and hopelessness. More significantly, the speaker uses the adverb, âGrotesquelyâ before describing how âthe same bars and coffeehouses are still [th]ereâ, showing the character's cynical characteristic. So does the use of the adjective âcheapâ for the goods at the stores. Thus, in the past, the character uses language interestingly [dash] it is diverse, lively and creative [dash]&amp;nbsp;whereas that of the past is inactive, hopeless and cynical. These differences are directly reflecting the character's contrasting, changed characteristic.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The change of the characteristic seems to be abrupt. As a cause, something would have happened to her, that is not shown in the passage. However, an assumption can be drawn within the evidences from the passage. There is a shift in the first paragraph within âHere,â showing the shifted tense from the past to the past perfect. In the past perfect, there is a scene of Clarissa, the major character, and her boyfriend Richard. She seems to appreciate Richard a lot, for example, she does not use the pronoun 'he' for âRichard,â even though he is the only male character. So, in a sentence, Richard is successively repeated three times, âwith Richard, when Richard â¦ when Richard.â Moreover, she describes his appearance in detail; he âwas nineteen,â âa firm-featured, hard-eyed, not-quite-beautiful dark-haired boy with an impossibly long and graceful, very pale neck.â So, to describe Richard, she combines an adjective and a noun to create a single adjective, such as âhard-eyed.â This shows her seriousness about describing him precisely. His âimpossibly longâ and âvery paleâ neck would seem negative, if not for the complementary adjective âgraceful.â Also, the adverb âimpossiblyâ gives a sense of special and unusual feeling for the person. Besides the use of language, the use of punctuation should also be noted. There are many commas, causing the sentences to seem choppy. This would be imitating the feeling of uncertainty and the tension in the situation. The uncertainty of the situation is shown in the line, ââ¦about what? A kiss? Had Richard kissed her, or had she, Clarissaâ¦,â also the tension created as they âhad certainly argued.â Then, the reason for the âargu[ment]â is explained: âClarissa wanted her freedom and Richard wanted, well, too much.â It is notable that as Richard âwanted â¦ too muchâ relating to the âkiss,â the pronoun 'he' is used as âdidn't &lt;I&gt;he&lt;/I&gt; always?â In this case, however, the pronoun 'he' seems to more likely indicate every 'man', rather than particularly âRichard.â Thereafter the paragraph ends, and the paragraph of the present starts. It is not sure whether the abrupt change in Clarissa's characteristic is due to âRichardâ or not. Although it is not, it is evident that Clarissa once considered and cared about him quite specially.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Despite of the uncertain reason, the change in the Clarissa's characteristic from the past to the present is shown clearly throughout&amp;nbsp; the contrasting structure, imagery and language. The characteristic includes the thoughts and perception, which were unrestricted, unfiltered, creative and animated in the past; whereas in the present, they are shown&amp;nbsp; restricted, filtered, dull and inactive. The change is extreme, but no particular evidence for the extremity is being suggested, except the short scene with Richard. Thus, this passage not only introduces the setting and the character, but also evokes the reader's curiosity: What has happened to Clarissa?&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;------------------------------------------------&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P&gt;I really really really appreciate for your help... Thank you..!&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
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&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Easy but long...)))</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EasyButLong/zgxmw/post.htm#451341</link><pubDate>Sun, 09 Dec 2007 16:20:51 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:451341</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><description>Hi Pres1dent&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;You should break up long posts such as this one into several short posts.&amp;nbsp; That way it's &lt;u&gt;&lt;b&gt;much&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/u&gt; easier for other people to comment.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;I've made suggestions. Some of the sentences in these exercises don't sound terribly natural, so there are also suggestions in places where there were no asterisks (**).&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;I. Grammar Exercises
&lt;br&gt;1 Articles
&lt;br&gt;1. *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(The)&lt;/font&gt;* equipment &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;of&lt;/strike&gt; from&lt;/font&gt; Blake &amp;amp; Co is very good.&amp;nbsp; They sell it to ** &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;various&lt;/font&gt; different companies
&lt;br&gt;2. Where are *the* newspapers? They are on *the* desk.
&lt;br&gt;3. There &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;is&lt;/font&gt; ** &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;much&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;a lot of&lt;/font&gt; built&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;b&gt;-&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;in furniture in our kitchen. *The* furniture makes *the* kitchen comfortable.
&lt;br&gt;4. We are interested in buying ** &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;the/ -&lt;/font&gt; machines from British companies.
&lt;br&gt;5. &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;*The* tools of&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; Blake &amp;amp; Co &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;tools&lt;/font&gt; are &lt;strike&gt;of&lt;/strike&gt; ** high quality.
&lt;br&gt;6. We&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;âve&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; received *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;the&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;an&lt;/font&gt;* enquiry for ** three machines &lt;strike&gt;lately&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;recently&lt;/font&gt;.
&lt;br&gt;7. ** Last month our manager went to St. Petersburg by train. He &lt;strike&gt;went there by&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;took&lt;/font&gt; *an * express train. *The* train had no stops.
&lt;br&gt;8. If you want to get &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;accommodation(s)&lt;/font&gt; at *a *hotel in Nice in &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;the&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;summertime&lt;/font&gt;
you must reserve *the* &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;room&lt;/font&gt; in advance. ** Nice hotels are
full during &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;the&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;summer &lt;strike&gt;time&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt;.
&lt;br&gt;9. The &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;s&lt;/font&gt;eller didnât agree to give us *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;a&lt;/font&gt;* discount as their goods were in *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;a&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt;* great demand at that price.
&lt;br&gt;10. We are interested in buying ** compressors for *a* new shop &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;in&lt;/font&gt; *&lt;strike&gt;the&lt;/strike&gt;* &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;a&lt;/font&gt; large plant in Siberia. *The* shop is already under construction
and &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;the&lt;/font&gt; customer&lt;strike&gt;s&lt;/strike&gt; require&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;s the &lt;/font&gt;goods urgently, as they must complete the
construction of the shop by the end of the year.
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;2 Prepositions
&lt;br&gt;1. She is sitting *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;on&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;at&lt;/font&gt;*  the table and &lt;strike&gt;speaking&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;talking&lt;/font&gt; *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;on&lt;/font&gt;* the phone. She is making an appointment &lt;strike&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;on&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;for&lt;/font&gt; Friday.
&lt;br&gt;2. They met Mr. Black *in* his office. The meeting began at 10 oâclock and lasted ** &lt;strike&gt;(for?)&lt;/strike&gt; two hours.
&lt;br&gt;3. *The* other day Rossexport received an enquiry for the motors of Johanson &amp;amp; Sons.
&lt;br&gt;4. The train will arrive with a delay &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;for&lt;/strike&gt; of&lt;/font&gt; 40 minutes. Will you go to the departure lounge and wait for the announcement?
&lt;br&gt;5. -Can you give us a discount *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;for/on&lt;/font&gt;* a large order?
&lt;br&gt;- As we have done a lot of business with you&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;,&lt;/font&gt; we can give you a small discount. &lt;br&gt;- In &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;that&lt;/font&gt; case&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;,&lt;/font&gt; weâd like to have a discount of 7%.
&lt;br&gt;6. The charge for a room in this hotel is not very high. 
&lt;br&gt;7. They offered to deliver the pumps *in* &lt;strike&gt;(of?)&lt;/strike&gt; four lots &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;of&lt;/font&gt; 12 pumps each&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt; in&lt;/strike&gt; at&lt;/font&gt; regular intervals of 5 months.
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(at regular 5-month intervals)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;8. Youâve reserved a single and a double room &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;for you&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; for two
nights on the fourth floor. These are modern rooms with private baths.
They donât face the street.
&lt;br&gt;9. -Iâd like a suit for office wear.
&lt;br&gt;-Try *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;on/-&lt;/font&gt;* this one &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;in&lt;/strike&gt; for&lt;/font&gt; size.
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(OR:&amp;nbsp; &lt;i&gt;Try this one on for size.&lt;/i&gt;)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;10. The &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;s&lt;/font&gt;eller offered the goods *at* CIF terms and payment collection.
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(This sounds clunky.&amp;nbsp; I'd just say this:&amp;nbsp; &lt;i&gt;The seller offered the goods CIF&lt;/i&gt;.)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;3 Degrees of comparison
&lt;br&gt;1. The Sony TV set is more expensive than the Akai TV set. Itâs one of the most expensive TV sets.
&lt;br&gt;2. Are our cars as &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;convenient &lt;/font&gt;as German cars?
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(In my opinion, &lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;reliable&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/b&gt; would be a more logical choice of words.)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;3. This is the busiest airport Iâve ever seen.
&lt;br&gt;4. I come &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;later&lt;/font&gt; on Monday&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;s&lt;/font&gt; &lt;strike&gt;later&lt;/strike&gt; than on other days.
&lt;br&gt;5. &lt;strike&gt;*More often*&lt;/strike&gt; we give &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;a&lt;/font&gt; discount to buyers&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt; most often&lt;/font&gt; if we have known them for a long time.
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;4Verb times
&lt;br&gt;1. Now you *see* Mr. Black in his office. During the day he *looks*
through English newspapers &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;and&lt;/font&gt; *discusses* business matters. Now he is
reading a letter. &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Later, h&lt;/font&gt;e *is going to phone* the manager of the company.
&lt;br&gt;2. -What model are you interested in?
&lt;br&gt;-Model BC5 *meets* our requirement.
&lt;br&gt;3. The fact *is* I sent you our offer last week. In my letter I
asked you to study it and give us your answer but we havenât received
it yet.
&lt;br&gt;4. -*&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Will&lt;/font&gt;* the plane &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;t&lt;/font&gt;o Moscow leave&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;s&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; on time?
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;/Will the plane to Moscow be leaving on time?&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;-There is a delay but it probably *wonât be* over 30 minutes
&lt;br&gt;5. Good morning, Mr. Black. Iâm glad to see you. I havenât seen you since we met in London
&lt;br&gt; 6. How long *&lt;strike&gt;it takes&lt;/strike&gt;* (&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;will it take&lt;/font&gt;?) me to get there?
&lt;br&gt;-Itâll take you about half an hour to get there at this time of the
day. There is a lot of traffic now. Look, bus 79A *is coming.*
&lt;br&gt;7. Have you discussed the terms of delivery yet?
&lt;br&gt;8. Jack arrived at the theatre about 7 oâclock. Ten minutes later he was sitting in the stalls and watching the performance.
&lt;br&gt;9. Rossexport started shipping the goods nine months after we *&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(had) signed&lt;/font&gt;* the contract.
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(Past perfect is OK, but not necessary.)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;10. I donât know when our accountant &lt;strike&gt;comes&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;will be&lt;/font&gt; back
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;5Reported speech&amp;nbsp;
&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;It's often difficult to judge reported speech without also knowing what the direct speech was.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;1. Mr. Black said it hadnât taken &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;us?&lt;/font&gt; long to discuss the price.
&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(It sounds as though the sentence need 'them' rather than 'us'.)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br&gt;2. The office manager said you would go &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;on business&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; to London &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;on business&lt;/font&gt; soon.
&lt;br&gt;3. Mr. Black asked if Mr. Taylor was staying with us.
&lt;br&gt;4. Mr. Black wants to know what discount Mr. Smith can give &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;us(?)&lt;/font&gt;.
&lt;br&gt;5. Mr. Black said your prices were very high and they couldnât accept them.
&lt;br&gt;6. Mr. Black asked who Mr. Brown was waiting for.
&lt;br&gt;7. Mr. Black wanted to know if Nancy had translated the letter.
&lt;br&gt;8. Mr. Black says to look through the quotation from Dunn &amp;amp; Co.
&lt;br&gt;9. Mr. Black said not to send the fax to Smith &amp;amp; Co.
&lt;br&gt;10. Mr. Black asked if their goods met Mr. Smithâs requirements.
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;6Modal verbs
&lt;br&gt;1. Can I offer you a cup of tea?
&lt;br&gt;2. -&lt;strike&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Must&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Do I have to&lt;/font&gt; go to the office every day?
&lt;br&gt;-No&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;, y&lt;/font&gt;ou &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;mustnât&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;don't&lt;/font&gt;.
&lt;br&gt;3. -&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;May&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Can&lt;/font&gt; I invite businessmen to the conference room?
&lt;br&gt;-No, you &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;mustnât (or mightnât?)&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;can't&lt;/font&gt;. It &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;must&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;has to&lt;/font&gt; be cleaned.
&lt;br&gt;4. When can you look through it?
&lt;br&gt;5. -Why are you so late?
&lt;br&gt;-Because I had to phone the British company.
&lt;br&gt;6. -Why did Mr. Smith go to London last month?
&lt;br&gt;-He was&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;/had &lt;/font&gt;to sign a contract there.
&lt;br&gt;7. If the manager doesnât have to stay late at the head office today&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;b&gt;, &lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;he will be able to meet Mr. Smith
&lt;br&gt;8. We received your offer 5 days ago &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;wand &lt;/strike&gt;but&lt;/font&gt; we &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;strike&gt;couldnât&lt;/strike&gt; haven't been able to&lt;/font&gt; study it &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(yet)&lt;/font&gt;.
&lt;br&gt;9. Who can make good coffee?
&lt;br&gt;10. You are to contact Black &amp;amp; Co next Monday.
&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Do I have to swear? - Past perfect (Test)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SwearPastPerfectTest/zbxkc/post.htm#426736</link><pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 17:23:42 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:426736</guid><dc:creator>Kooyeen</dc:creator><description>Well, I was saying that according to that explanation the simple past would always be wrong in that construction. But that's not true, because if I add some info, the simple past is ok:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;Three years had passed since we &lt;u&gt;had seen&lt;/u&gt; each other. &lt;/i&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;lt;--- past perfect&lt;/b&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;i&gt;Three years had passed since we [&lt;u&gt;saw/had seen&lt;/u&gt;] each other at that party in LA &lt;/i&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;lt;--- both should be ok here, right?&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/b&gt;Thanks &lt;img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile [:)]" /&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/b&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>