Hi, hi i'm valery how about you Write this as Hi, I'm Valery. How about you? However, consider this. 'How about you?' is commonly used after a personal statement, to ask if it also applies to the other person. eg

my teacher made correction symbols on my ps. but I don't know how to correct these mistakes for sure. run-on sentence: 1.Now with an enthusiasm to to teach people who aim to achieve high proficiency of English the priceless wealth of

excellent, excellent essay! i agree with the other poster's edits/comments. additionally, i would suggest also working a little on the intro. it begins slightly confusing as to what is happening. possibly change your first reference to the

Hi. Can you please correct my personal statement for medical school. Thank you for your time and consideration. Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE

Hi. Below is my personal statement for medical school. Please help correct it or provide comments :). Thank you for your time and consideration. __ "No! Not another disgusting lizard, Grandma!" I heartily protested as my grandma tried to

Response to "Why do you want to pursue a career in the medical field?" My personal statement is not complete yet...I will then go on to tell why specifically I want to become a doctor. I am not very happy with what I cultivated so

Motivation Letter! Hey!I need some help!I have to write a personal statement of my goals (essay min 1 page of my career inspiration).I am applying for Master Degree ,with major violin.I will be really appreciate ,if you help with some example

Hi, everybody! I have writen the draft of my personal statement for graduate program. Can anybody help to check it,and correct the mistakes? Thank you very mucn! 1. Academic backgrounds: During the years of undergraduate education, I have taken

PERSONAL STATEMENT!! I'm applying for Fashion Marketing and Promotion at London Fashion College and I'm a bit stuck on my personal statement. I need to get across my enthusiasm for fashion as well as that for the marketing and promotion

Hello, I could really do with some help with this one; I am writing my university personal statement for and English language degree. Should I use dashes instead of bracketing commas - when the interruption does not significantly interrupt the