Hi guys, would like to give me some feedback on my personal statement and check my grammar or anymistakes? THANKS! :) It is all about 'management'. Almost every aspect of life requires some sort of planning, organization, control,

Hi guys, would like to give me some feedback on my personal statement and check my grammar or anymistakes? THANKS! :) It is all about 'management'. Almost every aspect of life requires some sort of planning, organization, control,

Hi Grammar Geek, wow that was quick. Thanx a lot! But I'm really amazed, great forum. T.

Hello, I'm a guy from Sweden and right now I'm writing a letter to a university in the USA. Since it's a very important letter I want it to be perfect. I'd really appreciate it if someone here could have a look at it and give me

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :) My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about

This is my personal statement, wich I will send to 3 different universities. I'm not sure about the order in wich letter is written, nor of the grammar/spelling. Secondly, I don't know how to adress the people of the admissions commitee.

Hi everyone! I'm currently working on my personal statement for CTM course in UK. Could somene check it please advice on grammar, vocabulary and content. I know it is very like an autobiographical note but I think it gives a true overview of why I

I am a Chinese student and presently applying for postgraduate study in UK/US. Here is my Personal Statement. Please make some corrections on grammar. Many thanks! Personal Statement ------ The growth of a tree Winter invaded, every

Hi Sammy, From just glancing over your personal statement, I couldn’t help but ask you, are you from Hong Kong or England, because “6 th Form” catches my eyes? The general impression I got from a quick glance was that your grammar is

Hello! I am currently writing my personal statement for university, although I think that it still needs some work done to it. As I am going to be studying English Language at university, I figure that it's best to get the grammar and overall