Jesienne: First, welcome to the EnglishForums! The way to correct run-on sentences is fairly straightforward. You separate the long run-on sentence into 2 or 3 shorter sentences, each with one idea. You can use transitional adverbs to retain the

Hi All I had introduction meeting with a customer's manger, and I prepared a follow up thank you letter: Dear xyz it was a big pleasure to have this fruitiness meeting with you. and in case you needed any support or have any issues you should

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE The unprecedented explosion of corporations and financial services industry has brought about immense opportunities to utilize newer principles, methodologies, tools and practices in the field of finance. It is this

Hi everybody, I'm working on my personal stetement for postgraduate programme (Media and Communications Studies). I've managed to put there everything I wanted, but I'm not sure whether it's uderstandable, gramatically correct,

. I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this

Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding in order to improve my intellectual capacity by mastering on European Studies and create higher utility for Turkish Cypriot society by making new

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :) My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about

Hi folks, Hereunder is my personal statement for application to an university. Cud anyone do me a favor to help me check and revise? Your comment will be highly appreciated. Thanks a lot in advance! Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing

Hello, everybody! I am applying to universities this year, and I have to write an impressive personal statement or motivation letter but I am not sure if I am doing OK. Could you please revise my essay and recommend some amendments? I would