I knew I got a lot of grammar problems, so can someone helped me correct it? And please also tell me what should I write to improve! Thank you. Normal 0 false false false EN-US ZH-TW X-NONE

hello can someone chek my motivation letter for university?? Motivation letter I am a high school graduating, I would like to apply for a bachelor degree at university of Geneva preferably in the pharmacology program. In

On the whole, this is very well written. I can polish the grammar for you, if you wish. However, it is difficult to say what might sway the examiner in her favor. The crossed-out words are my deletions of the original text and the color bar words

Hi all The following is a personal statement I helped a friend of mine to write. She intends to use this to apply for a lead position in an orchestra. Please help her to correct this piece of writing and give some advice as to how we can

Which masterhand can revise or give suggestion on my PS? Thanks. Personal Statement I am a senior Chinese financial analyst focusing on FX and futures, who witnessed the latest 7 years’ ups and downs of Chinese financial derivatives

Everyone is screaming and running around. It is very noisy here. I am 4 years old and I am about to start my first art lesson. I am taking the brush and starting to paint the lemon tree that stands on the windowsill in my kindergarten. And as my

Everyone is screaming and running around. It is very noisy here. I am 4 years old and I am about to start my first art lesson. I take the brush and start to paint the lemon tree that stands on the windowsill in my kindergarten. And as my favourite

LOL a friend of mine asked me to help edit his paper. I editted it, but English is my ESL also. This is a personal statement to a UC... help pls, thanks in advance. First Prompt: What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the

Hi guys, would like to give me some feedback on my personal statement and check my grammar or anymistakes? THANKS! :) It is all about 'management'. Almost every aspect of life requires some sort of planning, organization, control,

Hi guys, would like to give me some feedback on my personal statement and check my grammar or anymistakes? THANKS! :) It is all about 'management'. Almost every aspect of life requires some sort of planning, organization, control,