Jesienne: First, welcome to the EnglishForums! The way to correct run-on sentences is fairly straightforward. You separate the long run-on sentence into 2 or 3 shorter sentences, each with one idea. You can use transitional adverbs to retain the

my teacher made correction symbols on my ps. but I don't know how to correct these mistakes for sure. run-on sentence: 1.Now with an enthusiasm to to teach people who aim to achieve high proficiency of English the priceless wealth of

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Hi I have written this as a concluding statement to my Personal statement. I have cited examples of challenges and opportunities in th eparagraphs. In totality this senetnce makes sense to me. However just to add I can put it like :- One thing

Hi, It is not part of my resume it is part of my personal statement where I have to explain my attributes. I just dont need to write jargons but even need to explain it in simple words

Below is a sentence included in a personal statement I am writing or grad school. I can't figure out how to structure the bolded area. Do I place a comma there (I'm worried that this sentence has too many commas already), should I use the

I am writing this sentence in my personal statement. Is the sentence grammatically sound? Is the tone appropriate for a personal statement. Giving say carmakers more money would not help their cause. Do I need to add a comma after

Hello, I could really do with some help with this one; I am writing my university personal statement for and English language degree. Should I use dashes instead of bracketing commas - when the interruption does not significantly interrupt the

The inimitable Gail Gurman (Email Removed) stated one day I'm getting ready to apply to law school and I'm finishing up writing my personal statement. I just have to ... Is subsequently saying "but I am proud of my ability..."

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