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My interest in media studies dates back to my years at high school when I started to realize how mass media and new means of communication change our everyday lives. I had a chance to observe the huge transformation of the media system in my country. After years of controlled media by a...

Hi everybody,I'm working on my personal stetement for postgraduate programme (Media and Communications Studies). I've managed to put there everything I wanted, but I'm not sure whether it's uderstandable, gramatically correct, atc.Any advice appreciated!Thankx.T. Dear Sir...

English language experts,could you check the grammer for me. urgent... as the dateline is this coming thursday. My interest in bookkeeping dates back to age 14. I was elected as the class treasurer due to my excellent result in mathematics. I had chosen to study science stream when...

.I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding...

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become as versatile as I can. Therefore, choosing a...

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :)My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about three years ago, realizing that this dynamic field...

i'm applying for a university and they asked me to write why am i a good candidate for the uni.. i wrote so far: I'm a good candidate because i know i do my best at things that i really like, and i'm a hard worker when i set my mind to it. I have just finished my high schol studies and I'm...

Hi,I've literally signed up in the last 5 minutes and I know it may be a bit cheeky to ask for help in my first post, but I really am desperate. I need to finish off with a few lines for my closing statement, so any tips you can give me for that would go down excellent.Well, I am applying for a...

Hi folks, Hereunder is my personal statement for application to an university. Cud anyone do me a favor to help me check and revise? Your comment will be highly appreciated. Thanks a lot in advance! Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this letter to apply for the Master of Business...

Dear forumI'm new here, finding this forum while searching for some paraphrases that are used in my Statement of Purpose (SoP), while applying for a PhD in Food Science.Then, I am lucky to find this forum, and I post my SoP here with the hope that someone, probably with a same interest, may read...