In Personal statements^x, Letter of motivation^x

Hi Emz.l.s., Would you mind telling us where you are? Are you going to study in the UK? It sounds like an excellent idea to ask your English teacher to amend your 'personal statement'. It's a very important document as a good personal statement can 'persuade' an admissions officer to offer you a...

I did some changes to the letter, and I wonder if it looks more acceptable now or if there is still some work to do for me?Thanks for your time, comments and help! Personal Statement I hold a three years bachelor's degree and a two years master's degree with honours in *** from ***. As...