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.I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding...

Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding in order to improve my intellectual capacity by mastering on European Studies and create higher utility for Turkish Cypriot society by making new linkages, learning new languages and being aware of...

I am a Chinese student and presently applying for postgraduate study in UK/US. Here is my Personal Statement. Please make some corrections on grammar. Many thanks! Personal Statement ------ The growth of a tree Winter invaded, every thing was coated with snow. A seed of a tree fell…. One...

this is my personal statement. i 'm not sure about it especially the 5th paragragh. thank you very much for any help!!! As a senior majored in business Administration, I have been exposed systematically to concepts and theories of every aspect of management such as logistic, marketing and...

Thank you nona for replying. I have redone my motivation letter, trying to "sell myself to the university" more rather then telling my past. Any more pointers that i should consider. Thank you so much for all your help. oh yea before i forget, they emailed from the uni telling me the...

Dear all, i have recently applied to university, and as required, i was supposed to write a personal statement of motivation. the requirements are : ------------ The motivation letter has to include four items: What is the international background you have, regarding nationality, place of...