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Personal Statement When I was a kid I was thrilled by “LEGO” and a freedom it gave me to design, practical anything .That hobby improved my creativity. And since when I knew where I wanted to express myself . I got my first computer when I was 10 year old and Soon I was introduce to the internet...

hey guys!!i'm just working on applications for universities and i'm starting to feel desperate with all those motivation letters and stuff...i hope one of you can help me with this one and tell me if i made too many mistakes. ;)thanks a lot!!! Honestly, I still did not know exactly...

My interest in media studies dates back to my years at high school when I started to realize how mass media and new means of communication change our everyday lives. I had a chance to observe the huge transformation of the media system in my country. After years of controlled media by a...

Hi everybody,I'm working on my personal stetement for postgraduate programme (Media and Communications Studies). I've managed to put there everything I wanted, but I'm not sure whether it's uderstandable, gramatically correct, atc.Any advice appreciated!Thankx.T. Dear Sir...

Hi Grammar Geek,wow that was quick. Thanx a lot!But I'm really amazed, great forum.T.

Hello,I'm a guy from Sweden and right now I'm writing a letter to a university in the USA.Since it's a very important letter I want it to be perfect.I'd really appreciate it if someone here could have a look at it and give me any hints on changes or anything!  Dear Sir or...

English language experts,could you check the grammer for me. urgent... as the dateline is this coming thursday. My interest in bookkeeping dates back to age 14. I was elected as the class treasurer due to my excellent result in mathematics. I had chosen to study science stream when...

.I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding...

Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding in order to improve my intellectual capacity by mastering on European Studies and create higher utility for Turkish Cypriot society by making new linkages, learning new languages and being aware of...

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become as versatile as I can. Therefore, choosing a...