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Personal Statement When I was a kid I was thrilled by “LEGO” and a freedom it gave me to design, practical anything .That hobby improved my creativity. And since when I knew where I wanted to express myself . I got my first computer when I was 10 year old and Soon I was introduce to the internet...

thanks a lot!!!i just didn't know sometimes how to correct the things you underlined o.O anyway, i tried to fix it a little bit at least!:)

.I have stricken out some inappropriate material and underlined other problem areas. You have trouble with commas:Honestly, I still did not know exactly what I wanted to study, when I was almost done with school. On one hand I was interested in the regular German program of Business Studies...

hey guys!!i'm just working on applications for universities and i'm starting to feel desperate with all those motivation letters and stuff...i hope one of you can help me with this one and tell me if i made too many mistakes. ;)thanks a lot!!! Honestly, I still did not know exactly...

"I had the opportunity to see the wide range of practical journalism and media studies courses" ?I had the opportunity to experience/attend/follow the wide range of practical journalism and media studies courses"

thank you for taking time to read it and for your helpful suggestions. Does it really make sense to say "I had the opportunity to see the wide range of practical journalism and media studies courses" ? I mean that was attending the courses... T.

My interest in media studies dates back to my years at high school when I started to realize how mass media and new means of communication change our everyday lives. I had a chance to observe the huge transformation of the media system in my country. After years of controlled media by a...

Hi everybody,I'm working on my personal stetement for postgraduate programme (Media and Communications Studies). I've managed to put there everything I wanted, but I'm not sure whether it's uderstandable, gramatically correct, atc.Any advice appreciated!Thankx.T. Dear Sir...

Hi Grammar Geek,wow that was quick. Thanx a lot!But I'm really amazed, great forum.T.

Hello,I'm a guy from Sweden and right now I'm writing a letter to a university in the USA.Since it's a very important letter I want it to be perfect.I'd really appreciate it if someone here could have a look at it and give me any hints on changes or anything!  Dear Sir or...