I wrote an essay about "Neighbors" by Raymond Carver. I tried my best, but I feel I need help to make correction of grammar mistakes and word choosing mistakes. I don't know whether you know about the story, "Neighbors" by

Could you please help me with these? thank you 1 The day I no longer have to worry about my account I will no longer talk about money and the conversation won't revert to money ever second. 2 Mousse de canard can pass for foie gras/can be

Are you talking to a flower when you say this? "No other flower..." I would also write "is as beautiful as you" but I may be in error there.

I'm in my third week of calling producers, studios and production companies, following-up on a project we are pitching. I've made about 40 or 50 calls, gone in for 5 meetings and had a half dozen more phone meetings. And it's all

Hey everyone ;) This is for my English GCSE coursework, it's basically what happens after the end of Lord of the flies. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Sorry it's a bit long. :) Ralph was standing on the deck of the

Dear Teacher, I meet these sentences: There were six or seven buildings of poured concrete, each three stories high, with screened-in porches punctuating the low clean lines. Question: what's the meaning of screened-in?

I've tuned in on the remake of Journey to the Center of the Earth, coming in at various different times, and for something like the third time, I've tried to get through it, and have found myself unable to do so. I just cannot get through

Can I say, Yesterday was sunny. Peter saw a bird on a tree while he was talking a wal k. He picked up a stone and threw it at the bird. The stone missed the bird. It hit a branch and fell down. It hit Peter's head . He felt pain and the

Thanks, I have corrected the parts that I know how to correct, but there are some parts that I really have no ideas on how to correct. My Hometown My love for my hometown, Tangkak, located in the sourthen part of Johor, is beyond

You have some agreement issues. e.g. We enjoys They dances, jogs, does Some odd word choices as well. You may want to stick to simpler words. I've also highlighted some of the more glaring issues for you to fix. My