Hello! Could anybody, please, correct this little text about my thesis? It's gotta be in English and I am a bit insecure.. Thanks you very much! The Carnation Revolution, occurred in April 25th 1974, was a democratic

Hey everyone ;) This is for my English GCSE coursework, it's basically what happens after the end of Lord of the flies. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Sorry it's a bit long. :) Ralph was standing on the deck of the

1 I went out to water the plants. I didn't know the jet/spray would be so strong/powerful when I turned on the hose. 2 I should never have gone out with her. We should have stayed friends. I should have l eft/kept it at that. 3 With these

How would you say these if they are wrong ? 1 I went out to water the plants. I didn't know the jet would be so strong/powerful when I turned on the hose. 2 I should never have gone out with her. We should have stayed friends. I should have

Hello, like the other people here I agree that prepositions are hard to learn, so many of them have to be committed to memory. However, there are three basic prepositions for time and for location that are easy to memorize. I would like to share

This is an Essay that I have written. It is about how to persuade my comrades to take on leadership through an invasion period. Could you please suggest any better vocabularies to use or any better sentence structure for any sentence? Could you

This is an Essay that I have written. It is about how to persuade my comrades to take on leadership through an invasion period. Could you please suggest any better vocabularies to use or any better sentence structure for any sentence? Could you

Can I say, (1) Peter and his friends were playing happily. Suddenly, a monkey jumped out from / jumped down from the tree . He grabbed the football and ran away. They felt surprised to see the monkey. (2) While they were playing, a monkey jumped

Here's a letter I just mailed to the appropriate individuals about the closing of the LACMA film series. Dunno how much good this is going to do, but I figure it is better to do more rather than less about this matter. ( begin included letter

Here are some suggestions: Last month, Peter and his friends were playing soccer at the field. The sky was overcast. There was an overcast that covered the sky. Suddenly, it started to rain ; soon it was raining cats and dogs. They ignored