I wrote an essay about "Neighbors" by Raymond Carver. I tried my best, but I feel I need help to make correction of grammar mistakes and word choosing mistakes. I don't know whether you know about the story, "Neighbors" by

So, back in March (seven months ago; I'll save you the math) I brought a couple of new family members into my home - Auralia and Blanquita. Rescued goldfish from the feeder tank, as some of you might remember, and Blanquita didn't last the

Are you talking to a flower when you say this? "No other flower..." I would also write "is as beautiful as you" but I may be in error there.

"Alan Brooks" We don't have earthquakes either Don't be too sure... http://www.livescience.com/environment/080821-new-york-earthquakes.html Study: Large Earthquake Could Strike New York City By Robert Roy Britt, LiveScience

In the zone we were at first kept under the shadow of a tree. Later, a captain shouted, “blindfold these people and take them under the sun”. Are there any mistakes? Is it OK to ask someone to take someone under the sun? (the commander

Suppose, as you walked through a park, you saw something moving strangely on the grass. Suppose it's evening and there isn't much light. It looks to you like a little animal of some kind. You approach closer, and when you get very close,

This is an Essay that I have written. It is about how to persuade my comrades to take on leadership through an invasion period. Could you please suggest any better vocabularies to use or any better sentence structure for any sentence? Could you

This is an Essay that I have written. It is about how to persuade my comrades to take on leadership through an invasion period. Could you please suggest any better vocabularies to use or any better sentence structure for any sentence? Could you

* As the man tied the rope around the tree, getting ready to descend the rope to the next cliff ledge /recess , what he didn't think about was whether the tree could bear his weight. -- If there was a typo, 'ledge' is correct; 'edge' is not. *

Hi, just to clear things up I've been hitting nice shots today, at least more than usual ( is it THAN THE USUAL or THAN USUAL? How many more points do you get when you hit a strike than a spare? THIS ONE I WASNT SURE,