In Prepositions^x, Motivation letters^x, Commas^x

Thank you for your comments. I really get myself in trouble when deciding where to put commas because in portuguese we have different reasons to use them. And it also seem that i missed that preposition class... I will review it and post it again, ok? Daiane

Hello all wonderful members! I am lucky because I found this community by chance, it seems to be a great place! I am writing a motivation letter for an organization offering a full-year scholarship at an U.S. top unversity. (The application also includes a resume a study plan and two...

Hello Georg. The following words and phrases need repair: At first -- or omit it entirely have gave in UNIVERSITY2 -- wrong preposition September 2000 -- I think I am a little late in helping you. till - change to 'through' reasons -- needs a comma succeed in serving -- change to...