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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Present simple tag:Constructions' matching tags 'Present simple' and 'Constructions'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aPresent+simple+tag%3aConstructions&amp;tag=Present+simple,Constructions&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Present simple tag:Constructions' matching tags 'Present simple' and 'Constructions'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3232.18851)</generator><item><title>Re: if clause</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/IfClause/zjmgk/post.htm#465402</link><pubDate>Thu, 17 Jan 2008 12:31:03 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:465402</guid><dc:creator>Hoa Thai</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Devrim55 wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;p&gt;If we ...........ready for the YDS exam decently, we .........at least two and a half hours a day for reading questions.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;a)were to get / should have spared&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;b)got / would have spared&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;c)are to get / had spared&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;d)have gotten / would spare&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;e)have to get / must have spared&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;thanks in advance...&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;Hi,&lt;br&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Here is a structure of conditional sentences:&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;b&gt;if &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement, result statement.&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;From that structure, we have 4 basic conditional constructions:
&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type zero - &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; present simple, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; present simple.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type I â &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; present simple, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; shall / will / can/ may +
base verb.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type II â &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; past simple, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; should / would / could /
might + base verb.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Type III â &lt;/b&gt;condition
statement uses&lt;b&gt; past perfect, &lt;/b&gt;result
statement uses&lt;b&gt; should / would / could / might
+ have + past participle.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;None of the 5 choices matches with any pattern shown above.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: present simple after adjective</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PresentSimpleAfterAdjective/vkzrn/post.htm#384672</link><pubDate>Wed, 27 Jun 2007 02:13:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:384672</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><description>Hi Musesun&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;"This forbidden to make money in the university" is not a correct sentence. &amp;nbsp; The word "forbidden" is not a tense at all -- it is just the past participle (V3) of the verb 'forbid'.&amp;nbsp; You can say "This is forbidden", but you cannot say "This forbidden".&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Have you learned how to make passive sentences yet?&amp;nbsp; That seems to be what is confusing you.&lt;br&gt;The following pairs of sentences have the same meanings.&amp;nbsp; The second sentence in each pair is the passive form of the first sentence:&lt;i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Cowboys ride horses.&lt;/i&gt; = simple present tense, active voice&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;
Horses are ridden by cowboys&lt;/i&gt;. = simple present tense, passive voice&lt;br&gt;
&lt;i&gt;&lt;br&gt;He wrote that book.&lt;/i&gt; = simple past tense, active voice&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;That book was written by him.&lt;/i&gt; = simple past tense, passive voice&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;In addition to what I've written above, the past participle can also be used as an adjective.&amp;nbsp; For example:&lt;br&gt;That is a forbidden activity. = That activity is forbidden.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Sometimes it is difficult to decide whether a past participle has been used as an adjective or is part of a passive verb construction.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Correct order in which to parse a verb?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectOrderParseVerb/dwnqr/post.htm#293896</link><pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2006 14:29:51 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:293896</guid><dc:creator>Garnett</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Mister Micawber wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;br&gt;Future &lt;b&gt;Simple&lt;/b&gt; (I will sit)&lt;br&gt;Future &lt;b&gt;Continuous/Progressive &lt;/b&gt;(I will be sitting)&lt;br&gt;Future &lt;b&gt;Perfect&lt;/b&gt; (I will have sat")&lt;br&gt;Present &lt;b&gt;Simple&lt;/b&gt; (I sit)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Simple &lt;/b&gt;(I sat)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Continuous/Progressive&lt;/b&gt; (I was sitting)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Perfect&lt;/b&gt; (I had sat)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Perfect Continuous/Progressive&lt;/b&gt; (I had been sitting)&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Any I've missed? -- &lt;b&gt;See&lt;/b&gt; &lt;a href="http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/tenses.html" target="_blank" title="http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/tenses.html"&gt;&lt;b&gt;VERB FORMS&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Also can you hjelp me with Moods: Indicative, Subjunctive, Imperative. -- &lt;b&gt;See&lt;/b&gt; &lt;a href="http://www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/moods.html" target="_blank" title="http://www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/moods.html"&gt;&lt;b&gt;VERB MOODS&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;In
Latin you use the Jussive Subjuntive for sentences like "Let them eat
cake", or "Let's go to the park". What is this construction in English?&amp;nbsp;&lt;b&gt; This is a&lt;u&gt; causative imperative&lt;/u&gt; (I think).&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Awesome. Thanks for those references.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Mister Micawber wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;"The bus stop &lt;i&gt;was situated&lt;/i&gt; outside the airport&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; 3rd person singular, passive (&lt;i&gt;or more probably&lt;b&gt; active&lt;/b&gt; with the linking verb &lt;b&gt;be&lt;/b&gt; and a predicate adjective&lt;/i&gt;), indicative."&amp;nbsp; Are you parsing "&lt;b&gt;be&lt;/b&gt;" here, then? -- &lt;b&gt;Yes&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;Cool. That's what I thought.&lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Mister Micawber wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;Just
because "situated" is being used as a participle adjective here,
doesn't mean it can't be parsed like any other verb. It is a PPP isn't
it - past passive participle? -- &lt;b&gt;Not if it is an adjective.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;I disagree.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;In "the flying machine", "flying" can be parsed (at least partially) - Active present participle.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Participle Adjective: "A form of a verb that in some languages, such as English, can function independently as an adjective, as the past participle &lt;i&gt;baked&lt;/i&gt; in &lt;i&gt;We had some baked beans,&lt;/i&gt; and is
used with an auxiliary verb to indicate tense, aspect, or voice, as the past participle &lt;i&gt;baked&lt;/i&gt; in the passive sentence &lt;i&gt;The beans were baked too long." ~ from &lt;a href="http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=participle&amp;amp;x=0&amp;amp;y=0" target="_blank" title="http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=participle&amp;amp;x=0&amp;amp;y=0"&gt;Dictionary.com&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;Is it a verb being used as an Adjective, or an out-and-out adjective? Frfom the definition above I would argue the former.&lt;i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Mister Micawber wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Don't confuse form and function&lt;/b&gt;.&lt;b&gt; It is wisest to call it simply an&lt;i&gt; -ed&lt;/i&gt; verb form&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;I think that's the crux.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Have you sen my thread &lt;a href="/English/IWasStoodAtTheBusStop/dwnnl/Post.htm" target="_blank" title="/English/IWasStoodAtTheBusStop/dwnnl/Post.htm"&gt;here&lt;/a&gt;?&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;What are your thoughts?&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;I believe "stood" can replace "situated" in the sentence "I was situated at the bus stop".&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;"Situated" is defined in the dictionary as an adjective in its own right. "Stood" is not.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;It appears then, to hinge on whether "situated" is a adjective "&lt;i&gt;with the linking verb &lt;b&gt;be&lt;/b&gt; and a predicate adjective"&lt;/i&gt; or whether it is a "participle adjective" that could be replaced by any other participle adjective like "stood"...&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Correct order in which to parse a verb?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectOrderParseVerb/dwnpx/post.htm#293893</link><pubDate>Thu, 16 Nov 2006 14:12:20 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:293893</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>&lt;br&gt;Future &lt;b&gt;Simple&lt;/b&gt; (I will sit)&lt;br&gt;Future &lt;b&gt;Continuous/Progressive &lt;/b&gt;(I will be sitting)&lt;br&gt;Future &lt;b&gt;Perfect&lt;/b&gt; (I will have sat")&lt;br&gt;Present &lt;b&gt;Simple&lt;/b&gt; (I sit)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Simple &lt;/b&gt;(I sat)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Continuous/Progressive&lt;/b&gt; (I was sitting)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Perfect&lt;/b&gt; (I had sat)&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;Past Perfect Continuous/Progressive&lt;/b&gt; (I had been sitting)&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Any I've missed? -- &lt;b&gt;See&lt;/b&gt; &lt;a href="http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/tenses.html" target="_blank" title="http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/tenses.html"&gt;&lt;b&gt;VERB FORMS&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Also can you hjelp me with Moods: Indicative, Subjunctive, Imperative. -- &lt;b&gt;See&lt;/b&gt; &lt;a href="http://www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/moods.html" target="_blank" title="http://www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/moods.html"&gt;&lt;b&gt;VERB MOODS&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;In
Latin you use the Jussive Subjuntive for sentences like "Let them eat
cake", or "Let's go to the park". What is this construction in English?&amp;nbsp;&lt;b&gt; This is a&lt;u&gt; causative imperative&lt;/u&gt; (I think).&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;"The bus stop &lt;i&gt;was situated&lt;/i&gt; outside the airport&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; 3rd person singular, passive (&lt;i&gt;or more probably&lt;b&gt; active&lt;/b&gt; with the linking verb &lt;b&gt;be&lt;/b&gt; and a predicate adjective&lt;/i&gt;), indicative."&lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&amp;nbsp; Are you parsing "&lt;b&gt;be&lt;/b&gt;" here, then? -- &lt;b&gt;Yes&lt;/b&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;Just
because "situated" is being used as a participle adjective here,
doesn't mean it can't be parsed like any other verb. It is a PPP isn't
it - past passive participle? -- &lt;b&gt;Not if it is an adjective.&amp;nbsp; Don't confuse form and function&lt;/b&gt;.&lt;b&gt; It is wisest to call it simply an&lt;i&gt; -ed&lt;/i&gt; verb form.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/b&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: had/would rather</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HadWouldRather/dcclx/post.htm#261168</link><pubDate>Wed, 30 Aug 2006 22:21:15 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:261168</guid><dc:creator>Goodman</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Emily__ wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Hi, I found some recommended explanations, but IÂ´m still a bit confused:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;1. IÂ´d rather you &lt;U&gt;went&lt;/U&gt;.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;2. YouÂ´d rather &lt;U&gt;stay&lt;/U&gt;. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;(I suppose "Â´d" could be either "had" or "would".)&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Why there is past simple in 1 and present simple in 2? &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Thank you.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#800080&gt;Itâs pouring outside. Iâd rather be staying home than going out tonight&lt;/FONT&gt;. â the apostrophe âdâ to me is the contracted form of âwouldâ.&amp;nbsp; âHadâ seems wrong to me. &lt;/P&gt;

&lt;P&gt;1. IÂ´d rather you &lt;U&gt;went&lt;/U&gt;. âThe construction seems wrong but the apostrophe âdâ is âwouldâ.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;2. YouÂ´d (would) rather &lt;U&gt;stay&lt;/U&gt;, I presume â ok &amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Star Heritage:Translation, Part II</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/StarHeritageTranslationPart/2/cnmnj/Post.htm#234609</link><pubDate>Sat, 10 Jun 2006 13:40:11 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:234609</guid><dc:creator>Ant_222</dc:creator><description>Yeah, that was a bit more helpful. Thanks again, Goodman.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I understood my simple mistakes (was-&amp;gt;were, vigors-&amp;gt;vigor,...) after your first post. Now I have understood a few more ones.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Here are the problems that I still haven't resolved:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sorry for maybe stupid questions, but even a correction given, I sometimes don't understand it and ask for an explanation.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;The swamp had been left behind. I was on a field overgrown with grass. Now I distinctly saw strange metal constructins (metal construction is a structures. Not sure what you tried to depict in the preceding sentense !)  in the east.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You wrote: &amp;#171;metal construction is a structures&amp;#187;. I don't understand it. What's the problem with &amp;#171;metal constructions&amp;#187;? And which sentence did you refer to as the &amp;#171;preceding sentense&amp;#187;? &amp;#171;I was on...&amp;#187; or &amp;#171;Now I distinctly...&amp;#187;?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;In the north I was amazed to find an _uncomely_ (choice of word) path going across the swamp.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Is one of the below alteratives appropriate: imperceptible, unremarkable, unnoticable? I wanted to say that the path was difficult to note (spot).&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;I stood at the territory of an abandoned factory. Everything here had grown over with grass. (Everything here had been covered by the over-grown vegetation / grass)&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Ok, but maybe &amp;#171;was covered by overgrown vegetation&amp;#187;?&lt;br /&gt;I think the Past Pefect and the definite article are not needed. Am I right?&lt;br /&gt;And is &amp;#171;to be grown over with&amp;#187; incorrect? I am asking it becasue I derived this phrase from my dictionary.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;..._addle_ (not familiar with is word) wooden crates&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;As an unexperienced non-native speaker, I have troubles with word choice. So, I commented in the previous post: &amp;#171;(I) Don't know a word to express what happens to wood with time, especially when it's in a humid environment.&amp;#187; Then I listed some words, one of which I thought to be suitable: decomposed, decayed, corrupt... Which adjective can be applied to wood?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;To the north of the factory were rocks, (and ) the swamps stretched  (stretching) to the south.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;... and the swamps stretching to the south&amp;#187; â is this what you propose? Maybe you didn't understand what I wanted to express here:&lt;br /&gt;To the north of the factory were rocks. To the south of it were the swamps. In order to be not repetitive I said the second in this way: &amp;#171;The swamps strethed to [in] the south&amp;#187;. Maybe replacing &amp;#171;to&amp;#187; to &amp;#171;in&amp;#187; will do?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;It seems (tense, seemed), that it was a weapon factory.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Yes, I have read that in your previous post and wrote (in my previous post) why I used Present Simple here. It's not so easy to me to deal with tenses in a text adventure... Maybe I'll ask this in a seperate thread...&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;I passed the factory by. It was  (silently uncomfortable) _silent and comfortless_ here.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Silently uncomforable? &amp;#171;Silent and comfortless&amp;#187; doesn't sound right to you? Why? Of course it can be a sort of the feeling of the language, so you may not know the answer...</description></item><item><title>Re: Star Heritage:Translation, Part II</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/StarHeritageTranslationPart/cnlmg/post.htm#234300</link><pubDate>Fri, 09 Jun 2006 19:31:11 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:234300</guid><dc:creator>Ant_222</dc:creator><description>Thank you very much, Goodman.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Below I have tried to correct the errors you pointed out, but I didn't succeed. In many cases I don't know what's incorrect and how to correct it. So I need further help on part of my errors.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;At night I had to _orient_ by touch. Suddenly I fell into a deep pit full of smelly water. I couldn't get out of it...&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I didn't see nothing, so I had to orient by touch. Isn't &amp;#171;orient&amp;#187; equal to &amp;#171;orientate&amp;#187; in this context?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Hardly had I _rised_ my _look_ to the sky, the winged demons pounced _on_ me.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;rise -&amp;gt; raise?&lt;br /&gt;look -&amp;gt; eyes?&lt;br /&gt;on -&amp;gt; at, upon?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Somehow I managed to _beat_ off the birds&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Yeah, what's wrong with the &amp;#171;beat&amp;#187;?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Now I distinctly saw strange metal _constructins_ (structures?) in the east&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Constructions&amp;#187; doesn't equal &amp;#171;structures&amp;#187; in this context, do they?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;In the north I was amazed to find an uncomely ( choice of word) path...&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Hmm.&lt;br /&gt;Uncomely -&amp;gt; imperceptible, unremarkable, unnoticable?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;I stood at the territory of an abandoned factory. _Everything here had grown over with grass._&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Is &amp;#171;Everything here was grown over with grass&amp;#187; ok, or is there another problem (not tense)?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Part of the buildings was _runious_.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;runious -&amp;gt; runious?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;..._addle_ wooden crates...&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;Don't know a word to express what happens to wood with time, especially when it's in a humid environment.&lt;br /&gt;Probable choices are:&lt;br /&gt;putrid, decomposed, decayed, corrupt... Which can be applied to wood?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Passing by the factory I looked at the ruins one more time. It seems (tense), that it was a weapon factory.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Well, these are actual thoughts of the main character, so I used present simple. As I wrote above, his actions are described in past tenses, whereas his thoughts in present ones, as if he were writing them in a diary after completion.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For example, in a diary we may find something like the following:&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;Date: so and so. Today I went to Moscow and bought a scanner there. It's very good: a standard 18x24 mm frame from my FED-Micron it scans into an image &amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thus, past events are in are in past tenses, while actual (by the date) ones are in present teses... It's a text adventure, so writing everything in past tenses (as a usual narrative) won't do.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;#171;It was silent and _comfortless_ here.&amp;#187;&lt;br /&gt;No idea why &amp;#171;comfortless&amp;#187; is incorrect.</description></item><item><title>Once you</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/OnceYou/bznzm/post.htm</link><pubDate>Thu, 23 Jun 2005 23:34:14 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:111940</guid><dc:creator>Klavier</dc:creator><description>Hello.&lt;br /&gt;In this construction with &lt;STRONG&gt;once&lt;/STRONG&gt;, can I use present simple or present perfect? Is there any difference?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Once you have bought the car, send me the invoice.&lt;br /&gt;Once you buy the car, send me the invoice.</description></item></channel></rss>