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This paragraph is part of a compare/contrast essay. I am comparing one character from Animal Farm and one from either Julius Caesar or Lord of the Flies. The two I chose are Napoleon and Jack. Some guidelines I have to follow are: Only a max of 2 "to be" verbs per paragraph and use...

This paragraph is part of a compare/contrast essay. I am comparing one character from Animal Farm and one from either Julius Caesar or Lord of the Flies. The two I chose are Napoleon and Jack. Some guidelines I have to follow are: Only a max of 2 "to be" verbs per paragraph and use...

Dear anon: You have a problem with structuring sentences with a clear subject and verb. To fix this problem, try to write a lot of very simple sentences first. (one subject - one verb) Once you have the ideas clearly stated in simple sentences, you can combine them into more complex sentences....

Aristotle's Ethics Hi,Essays should not include a table of contents.I started off 'bolding' my edits, but then stopped doing that, so just read carefully please.I've just looked at the introduction, whch took me a while. Content 1. The significance of ethics for Aristotle. 2....

You had too many spaces between Leet and ","My grandmother, Julie Lovins, put everything on the line for her job, including her life. She worked for the Leet Psychiatric Clinic in Lexington, Kentucky, and flew to various locations with Dr. Leet, a psychiatrist, to help patients. ...

I must admit I couldn't find much at all for errors in your essay, while I did take four years of English in college I don't consider myself a professional. Although this is what I found, you had too many spaces in the first paragraph. and a few present tense's in the fifth...

In the essay, when we refer to the previous paragraph, I am not sure if we should use Past tense or Present tense? Example: In the paragraph2.2 the detail was not covered all design.

Hi there, My teacher gave me comments on my essay. Below are his comments: This letter was obviously written with the rules of letter structure and paragraphing in mind. It is clearly laid out and well-organised. The paragraphs are balanced and of rougly equal length. I don't understand why...

Hi, I took a look at your essay, and I still see a regular switch between past and present tenses. As a reader, I find this confusing. Just my 2 cents. I proofread one paragraph for you. “The Motorcycle Diaries”, directed by Walter Salles, is a film based *in (wrong prep.) a true-life...

I suggest that you try putting the whole thing into past simple, and then try writing about it in past simple. That might make it easier to understand. But when I expresses the author's view on the story, do I use present tense? Let's say this is what I have to write about this story: 1. In...