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Hi Edd, This is not much more than a plot summary. I've highlighted your glaring errors. Hope it helps. Shakespeare’s play, Othello, is an old masterpiece that depicts jealousy in various aspects. In the play, Othello, the protagonist, is beguiled by his most-trusted companion, Iago, who...

Hi, Ali. This is a really nice essay, and I know exactly what you mean about perfumes! You need a little atTention to your grammar, word order and tenses, so let's try and help out. You have used the present continuous for a lot. (the 'ing' form). When we write a story, it is usual to use the...

Hi MrPedantic, I'm back! I've completed my revision essay. I changed my audience--so all paper. Original version of essay, my instructor's comments, and the final version are below. I would greatly appreciate any feedback. I know it is very long--and sorry about it. So, I don't mind if you think...