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Wang Mengjie (Ms.), First, I trust you have read the top two posts in this section of the forum? I want to be sure that you are willing to have you information available to world at large and have it remain so. Second, your essay is very chaotic. It needs some structure. You need to simplify...

Dear sir or madam I have just completed my personal statement, or motivationa letter for applying for a Ma Programme in Marketing at a university in UK. I am anxious about it as the high admission requirements by the school. Could you please check it for me, please? Yours faithfully, maggiewong...