In Promotions^x, Motivation letters^x

Dear GURU,I am applying for a MSc programme in Health Management at a UK university and needed to write an outline on the following:Your plan for future.provide an outline of your ambitions and career plan. How do you intend to "make a difference" in you country? no more than 250...

I have reviewed your letter again, with suggested changes in bold. I cannot follow all your colours and interjections, so I have merely amended as I think best (and some of them are improvements on my own previous suggestions):Program Code: MKT2345 February 2, 2008 Dear Sir/Madam: I am...

Thankyou very much Mister Micawber! The revised letter is as following after your suggested changes. and few additions from myside. I applied for three diffenent Master programs. International Marketing, Leadership Management and Entrepreneurship & Innovation. Some Paras need to be customised...

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

I AM SENDING THE MOTIVATION LETTER AFTER 2-3 DAYS! PLS GIVE YOUR COMMENTS TO MAKE IT ACCURATE N PERFECT! THIS FORUM IS DOIN A GREAT JOB!.... JUST WELDONE! Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC February 2, 2008 I am writing to apply for the Master’s Programme in ***. ...

UNIVERSITY OF ***, Faculty: Marketing Communication Sciences. Dear Sir / madam or admissions board: One of the many things I learned over the few years I’ve worked in the private and public sector is that in order to go furtherin my career I need to obtain a master’s degree....

Comments in pink, other problems/errors in yellow. Lots of missing articles here. Good luck with your application though, the structure of your letter looks ok. It is a good idea to state why you want to do this particular course and not all the other human rights courses, and if this is to study...

Please give me some feedback on this letter of motivation. I am witting to apply for the postgraduate studies starting in the fall of 2007. I found that the Master’s programme in the Human Rights corresponds well with my future plans in doing practical and legal work for human rights...

Hello Andrew, Thanks for the compliments. Yes, we are all volunteers. I don't think I want to admit how much time I spend here but for me it is a way to relax. I work for myself from home and I don't have anyone to go and have a coffee break with, so when I want to take a break for ten minutes...

Hello everybody! I seriously need some help for correcting my motivation letter and my curriculum vitae. I have never done one before, so if you have any comments or you find any mistakes PLEASE let me know. I would definitely appreciate that! Thanks, Sara P.S. Do you have any suggestions for...