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Pls,someone help me,i've got my SOP,but it seems to me a little off.I mean it should be more cohesive and have smooth transaction from my experience to why MBA?

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

I AM SENDING THE MOTIVATION LETTER AFTER 2-3 DAYS! PLS GIVE YOUR COMMENTS TO MAKE IT ACCURATE N PERFECT! THIS FORUM IS DOIN A GREAT JOB!.... JUST WELDONE! Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC February 2, 2008 I am writing to apply for the Master’s Programme in ***. ...

Dear Sir, My name is ___ ___ , a PhD candidate from ___________. I am working on the quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion for my PhD thesis. I am aware of a recent article and some discussions on issues in pharmaceutical promotion published in your newspaper. I am very...

Dear Sir, My name is ___ ___ , a PhD candidate from ___________. I am working on the quality of information in pharmaceutical promotion for my PhD thesis. I am aware of a recent article and discussions on issues in pharmaceutical promotion published in your newspaper. I am very interested to...

Comments in pink, other problems/errors in yellow. Lots of missing articles here. Good luck with your application though, the structure of your letter looks ok. It is a good idea to state why you want to do this particular course and not all the other human rights courses, and if this is to study...

Please give me some feedback on this letter of motivation. I am witting to apply for the postgraduate studies starting in the fall of 2007. I found that the Master’s programme in the Human Rights corresponds well with my future plans in doing practical and legal work for human rights...

Hi Sara, I've made a number of changes, so please read carefully. You sound like an extremely confident person (which is an asset). Good luck with this. Write again if you need more help. Best wishes, Clive put your full address in top right corner Milan, 28 August 2006 Dear Mr, Schmidt...

You again misunderstood me. But I think this confusion stems from understaning of the term politics. I tried to say even such an organization which doesnt have to do anything regarding to this case (an historical event) can make decisions because of the diaspora.As for Sub-Commission on the...

FRAUD FRAUD FRAUD MICROSOFT EMAIL LOTTERY INTERNATIONAL / WORLD INTERNET LOTTO CENTRE AMSTERDAM FROM: INTERNATIONAL PROMOTION / PRIZE AWARD DEPT. PROMOTING INTERNET USAGE OVER THE GLOBE ( WE ENCOURAGE GLOBALIZATION)REF:...